Reviews for Completion
Thirdly chapter 7 . 10/9
First off, as much as I enjoyed reading Rorake x Loius, I was hoping for some Albus x Scorpius in it as well and you didn't disappoint! I thought it was hilarius that both pairs had to abstain for a while for different reasons. I thought it was hilarius that Molly took a liking to Rory and that the Potter and Weasley family genuinely like him more than they liked Scorpius (for the time being)!

When Albus determinedly went to the funeral to give Scorpius his support, it was quite touching. I may have teared up a little. And I even like how Lily regretted her flower joke after seeing how grave and serious the funeral turned out to be for the family that remained.

Ugh, and the sketchbook full of Louis drawings just about killed me sentimentally. So sweet and heartfelt. Also, I would like to think that the bravery of Al x Scor and Rory x Louis would have inspired other same gender couples to show their own public displays of affection. Maybe not right away, but surely not all of them would remain in hiding.

Though the sequel read more like an epilogue to me, I really enjoyed it! I always love reading all the resolutions after the main storylines are finished. I love it.
lu-chan101 chapter 7 . 12/26/2015
Awnnnnnn! ! And where is albus and scorpus side?
daenerys chapter 7 . 5/4/2015
This is utter perfection!
Anne chapter 7 . 1/25/2015
Awww! I'm feeling like such a sap now.. But this was just too cute! And go Harry! :D
CBF signing in chapter 7 . 6/10/2014
As always awesome writing! I think I read this (and corruption) a while ago, but rereading just further ingrained how good your writing is! Thatnks ever so much!
Really loved it!
Yinzer Reader chapter 7 . 4/1/2014
Lovely addition to Corruption. Thank you!
GlambertMatt chapter 7 . 3/19/2014
Oh man I wish that could have went for much longer, I really like Louis and Rory, I was so happy when they finally got to have that moment together to express themselves by giving their bodies over as well as their hearts, that was so adorbale.

Well done on all your stories I have read so far, you have now done what only two others before you have done and made my fav authors list as opposed to just stories.

MinervaEvenstar chapter 7 . 8/9/2013
I spent the past few days rereading Corruption and then read Completion (I'd started to read this in the past, but never finished). Corruption was still hot and suspenseful the second time, and Completion was a fun triumph. Louis' vanity made me laugh and I was impressed 'Rory' and 'Freckles' were able to remain celibate until it was legal. I cheered aloud when the law was abolished, for you'd gotten me so attached to the characters of Scorpius, Al, Rorake, and Louis that I was truly happy for them.
aphroditeinlove chapter 7 . 6/24/2013
an amazing fic... Totally loved it.. Both corruption and completion
DemeRain chapter 7 . 4/20/2013
Thanks for sharing!
The Amazing Writer Girl chapter 1 . 3/16/2013
I have a question that has been plaguing me ever since I read Corruption (which I LOVED btw) : does Louis have a British accent or does he have a french accent?
evillygood chapter 7 . 1/1/2013
I love the continuation! thank you for writing this!
Newt Marauder chapter 7 . 11/19/2012
Thank you for the sequel! I wish this could go on super long, but this is good too. :) I was so glad when it wasn't illegal anymore, and they could all carry on their lives as they should. Thank you for these to stories. Oh, and Rorake Goyle. Fabulous job!
Glynna chapter 7 . 10/19/2012
Adorable, I loved both parts to this so insanely much. You're amazing. Thank you. Just wow.
Scatter Hyourinmaru chapter 7 . 8/26/2012
I know you wrote this awhile ago, but I think that you should add another chapter or something with Al and Scorpius' night. :) I love this story and it's prequel! It's great! :D
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