Reviews for Wrong, But Oh So Right
ShadowAngel100 chapter 1 . 5/14
I'm not sure how I feel about this... I like the shop but I think the romance was a little rushed.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/8
it was a great chapter witch showed how the charters would act but there are a few misspelled words
Guest chapter 1 . 8/1/2016
That was great I loved it
SilentDragon3373 chapter 11 . 7/9/2016
Love it! Great plot...might just have to barrow the Russian cousin idea thou!
Ninjaboy13779546 chapter 7 . 5/14/2016
I Know you stopped but I have a suggestion on Sergei's superhero name.
Brother Russia
Guest chapter 3 . 8/31/2014
I hate dark Dave
Too mushy
Guest chapter 11 . 8/25/2014
Hey come on I love ur story please update
Guest chapter 1 . 8/4/2014
Omg when you made the let me in joke I think I literally shit myself from laughing so hard
Guest chapter 11 . 6/1/2014
Emily chapter 7 . 1/30/2014
DestroyerDRT chapter 11 . 10/19/2013
I so hope that when you feel better about your writing style that you rewrite this for it had some very good parts to it. The only par I dislike was Dark Dave has Big Daddy.
DestroyerDRT chapter 1 . 10/19/2013
That was great. Dave line about her raping him I think until she was of age in the state of NY that if they did she would have to rape him.
TheFoolishThief chapter 11 . 5/1/2013
Continue goddammit, I enjoy reading your story.
catnip31 chapter 11 . 4/4/2013
I love the story :) if you know of any that are like it or site I can find it them on I'd really appreciate it :)
Rickjames196 chapter 5 . 8/5/2012
Wtf is wrong with Dave? It's wrong enough she is a loli. But now he is turning into a psychotic drunk? ugh. Awww chris got his dad. Ohhh he has "the colt" p Old school, throwing rocks. Lame, after all his bs and emoness he just let chris run away... gah Dave is such a pussy. Wtf where is his dad... that was a waste of time?
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