Reviews for Graduation Day
BEMHelene chapter 2 . 6/27/2013
So nice that Mac came home in time! And i love that you made her a general :)
starryeyes12 chapter 1 . 5/26/2011
great story
starryeyes12 chapter 2 . 5/23/2011
great story
japetn chapter 2 . 5/18/2011
Great follow up!
svugirl chapter 2 . 5/17/2011
Wonderful story!

It was great to read this story from Mac's point of view. I loved how you got a different perspective of the events that unfolded during the graduation.

From reading this story through the eyes of both Harm and Mac you get to see the different emotions each of them are feeling, and the events that lead to that defining moment when Ella and the rest of the family see Mac walking out on the stage.

Very unique, and a fun way to read a story :-) You have a wonderful way with your writing :-)

Keep writing those stories I cannot wait for your next one! :-)
carolfd chapter 2 . 5/17/2011
So love these characters, Nettie. This was a wonderful story -very heartwarming and sweet. Please keep them coming.
robertwnielsen chapter 2 . 5/17/2011
I love this new chapter...although I have to admit, I was surprised to see it. Having said that, it was a wonderful addition to a wonderful story - reading about events from Mac's point of view, since Chapter 1 was from Harm's point of view. Beautifully done.

alix33 chapter 2 . 5/17/2011
"I have no idea what she'd be wearing if I'd have left it to Harm. He's finding it hard to accept his little girl is growing up. I'm sure, left to him, Ella would be here in pigtails and the pale pink overalls he loved her in when she was two." - The mental pic of the pigtails and the pink overalls was incredibly funny.

"I see David clambering onto the stage calling my name. Instantly he has a death grip around my legs and I'm amazed at how much he seems to have grown in the five weeks I was away; he's looking more and more like his daddy every day and I bend down and kiss his head." - AW!

"Not only am I desperate for some familiar nutrition, I know I need to build up my energy stores. I don't know what Harm has planned for himself when he gets home but, I can tell you now, my plans are going to involve him being completely naked and in our bed...or shower...or anywhere else, once the children are asleep." - Yum!
Lynnp chapter 2 . 5/17/2011
Fantastic! Thanks for a great story!


jpstar57 chapter 2 . 5/17/2011
General Mackenzie? Nice touch. I really look forward to more stories from this Mackenzie-Rabb family. Keep up the good work.
bethsthings chapter 2 . 5/17/2011
Wonderful prefect evening for all. Loved it thanks for sharing your talent with us Nettie.
jrfanfrommo chapter 2 . 5/17/2011
Awww girl another beautiful story! As much as I miss your epic stories I'm loving these littler ones too...:D

Can't wait for more!
byrhthelm chapter 2 . 5/17/2011
Excellent! I smiled all the wy through, even though I knew how the story would end.

But, hey! enough of the Pommie-bashing already! ;-)

Your food review is about 20 years out of date!
japetn chapter 1 . 5/16/2011
LOve it! Thank you!
bookimpva chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
Good job, Mac, for making it home. You are nothing like your parents!

Sweet story; it reminds me how much time is flying by with my own munchkins. Thanks
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