Reviews for Just Us
xrosepetalsx chapter 1 . 9/29/2012
Clare's mom reminds me of my own here. She just /knows/ something was going on xD But I really like the idea of their urban adventure, and those church ruins, having been a place that Eli knew from his time with Julia, and I love how he trusts and loves Clare enough to bring her there.
Iamavampire chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
great job!
ANAHI'Simagnation chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
literarylolita chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
So sweet! AND FUNNY! I love it when you write funny stuff!
The Cliffhanger Girl chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
Loved it :D It seems as if I'm never disappointed with you're stories (:
BubbleWraps chapter 1 . 5/14/2011
Aw that was so cute! :D
kadabrafreak890 chapter 1 . 5/14/2011


But actually, this is a great oneshot. Well done. :D
munrochambers4ever chapter 1 . 5/14/2011
This was actually really good. It was a perfect balance of not too much and enough. I think they did enough to make Eli say he "deflowered Clare" Good job! (:
xStayWithMe chapter 1 . 5/13/2011
StalkerAngel chapter 1 . 5/13/2011
It would have been SO FUNNY if Clare had somehow accidentally dialed her mom's cell during that... ah, encounter, and her mom HEARD IT ALL xD

Then again, maybe I'm just evil :)
Summersetlights chapter 1 . 5/13/2011
This was just...oh my.

The strawberry. So much sexual frustration. Dear lord.

I absolutely loved this.
eclarefan54 chapter 1 . 5/13/2011
This was really cute, oh how I wish they were still together.
musiksnob chapter 1 . 5/13/2011
This was interesting to read because it's hard to get back into the mindset of that innocent time and at first, it felt a little sad to me.

But it was so lovely to see Clare tease him and for them to kiss so wonderfully and their conversation about taking things farther felt really really genuine.

Just wonderful.

I miss this.
teasun89 chapter 1 . 5/13/2011
Wow this was really sweet! ] I loved it!