|Reviews for Brave New World|
| paracuties chapter 69 . 2/19
Wow. So I had to read through it again. And I realized - UGH BUT ED IS SO ANNOYING. AND AL TOO.
Mustang's been through a hard time. No need to make it any more difficult than it is for him. And so he just HAS to act super rude, even though he should be more mature than that, and...
Well. This chapter was good! Your chapters are unfortunately short, but you write a lot of other things so I'm fine with it, I suppose. I do hope that the solution starts coming around, though. It seems, just because there's so many small chapters, that the story is moving along really slowly. It'd be nice if your update could come soon.
Keep up the good work!
| Pia Bartolini chapter 69 . 1/9
And that about sums it up, doesn't it? I still see this trip going very, very badly for the group, but it's like that crash in the freeway at rush hour - messy and can't-look-away, all at the same time.
| scarletflamedance chapter 69 . 1/8
This is, again, one of the best fanfic of FMA that I have read! The writing is beautiful and your whole story is very unique! It also drives me to try re-watching the 2003 anime (although I keep putting it off... :/ ). The last time I watched it was about 5 years ago, so my brain is a little fuzzy. But great work as per usual, keep it up!
| QueenCari1129 chapter 69 . 1/8
Aw, I remember this story! So far I am enjoying it :)
| wolf's lament chapter 67 . 11/20/2013
Wow. I have really loved reading this story. You've captured the differences between the two worlds' characters very well. I'm especially enjoying Ed and Al's interactions with Winry. Can't wait to read more.
| MadManWithATimeTravellingBox chapter 35 . 11/6/2013
The link is messed up...
| a Mysterious Illusion chapter 67 . 10/21/2013
Alright! I finally reached the end! I've been having such a hard time focusing on things that..well, this is one of many stories I needed to get to the end of...
Anyway, I can't wait for more! Will you do more about what's going on on the other side of the Gate? I was wondering if you were going to, you know, explain how this happened...maybe show what the other brothers are doing...
| a Mysterious Illusion chapter 40 . 10/12/2013
Just letting you know I'm still reading! Sorry I haven't reviewed every chapter; I usually wait until the last one, but I already reviewed the first, so I figured I'd start reviewing more...
Anyway, I'm really loving this! I never actually thought much about it, (well, I kind of did, but not deeply) but the original series Winry wasn't really acknowledge for all her work, was she? I always kind of thought at least the Elrics appreciated her, but when compared to Brotherhood...
| scarletflamedance chapter 67 . 10/12/2013
I am absolutely LOVING your story! And I'm really happy that you updated it! Keep up your amazing work, I'll be sure to read it!
| Kina Kalamari chapter 67 . 10/11/2013
Gosh, it's been a while! I missed this story. :)
| a Mysterious Illusion chapter 1 . 10/9/2013
This whole idea is EPIC! I must keep reading...
| Steel-chibi chapter 65 . 7/10/2013
The story is a bit low-paced and the writing is crumbled (well, I don't exactly know if this is a normal thing for an angst story), but still it was an interesting read. It only came a bit closer to settling things right, and now there's the end... Maybe something gets clearer in next chapter.
| Just a Guest chapter 65 . 6/16/2013
I love to just come by and re-read some (OK, a lot) of your stories. They are amazing and you capture eeveryone's personality perfectly! So, after stumbling a minute at your page, I realised you updated 'Brave New World', one my my favorite stories created by you! I love your original idea, and describing the major difrences in the anime and manga through the characters.
So this is a wonderfulsurprise, and hope you update this story soon!Keep theinsperation going strong! c:
| Guest chapter 65 . 6/4/2013
LOVE! this fanfic! cant wait to see the next chapter thanx :)
| lotrprincess chapter 65 . 6/4/2013
This entire concept is just so unique. A crossover between different adaptions that's not just for humor purposes is something I've never seen before. I can tell that you're really digging deep into the character's differences between the anime and manga.