Reviews for Tutti i miei sbgali
Scarlotte O'Hara chapter 9 . 5/1/2013
i love her power im so cheering you on for the strong portrayal of her!
Scarlotte O'Hara chapter 4 . 5/1/2013
i dig that your not making her weak and helpess *cough cough like the anime even as hard as she tried she still was weak till the very last arc which was what 10 episodes?* i wish this side of her was more played up to be honest. and so glad she smacked grimm )
bleachdalilah chapter 3 . 3/14/2012
hey you think that maybe for the Author Notes you could do either A/N first or bold the type? it would make things less confusing :P great story though (:
luchia21100 chapter 15 . 7/14/2011
can u please send me the link to the sequel i really wanna read it
nypsy chapter 15 . 6/30/2011
the end here seems more focused on grimichi. kinka anticlimactic in the ulquihime section. was expecting a little more on marriage & life w/child. sorry.

This section is a bit rough-looks like words got dropped (like the fact this is talking about wedding day).

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It was currently January 14th and Toichi was born on October had even got their house done. Shigeru was in her manifest form which was either a shado, wind, lightning but with a shape, fire with a shape of a human body and shimmering ice with a human body. Though usually Shigeru was in her wind form. Building their house in the forrest where Orihime and Rukia first trained. It was amazing and outstanding. When Orihime was only a four months preganant. The dress was beautiful elegant white gown.
nypsy chapter 14 . 6/30/2011
well, since you posted a chap of sequel & there's a new character w/grim's last name, we know the consequences of this chap... also, you really should put a warning about the lil adult scene at top of this chap to prevent some random reader from getting you in trouble w/site & story pulled. apparently, lots of stories were getting yanked a while back.

yama can be such a bastard, but his character is consistent from fic to fic (as douchy harsh guy). hope when ulqui is in SS he isn't ostracized by community & makes friends.
Ulquishinee chapter 15 . 6/29/2011
Nice ending! Though, i don't get why hime's child had red eyes, since hime has grey one's(in anime) and ulqui has green(both in anime and manga), so didn't get that! It totaly goes against genetics on the traits the child has! Anyway, just saying that since why should the babies eyes be red, if neither of his parents have this trait! :
Ulquishinee chapter 14 . 6/29/2011
Hey briar! Why did you do that? It was just plain wrong making grimmy f a girl if his gay (can gays even get it on with girls if they like guys?) and what about ichi? Also, you shouldn't have included the sex scene in the story since this story shouldn't be about grimm f-ing some bitches! Sorry, for the bit of harshness, but it didn't make sense to me! :(
luchia21100 chapter 12 . 6/22/2011
yes theyre gettin married nd orihimes so awsome ulquiorra better not cheat on her or hes dead keep writin its awsome. I shall be awaiting your next chapter.
nypsy chapter 12 . 6/16/2011
protective ichi is super cute. surprised grim didn't challenge hime right away after all the squad 4 jokes when she was alive!

can't wait for tats, rukia & hime to plan wedding (quickly i hope, since who knows when she has to go back to ss). might wanna mention somewhere (e.g., to tats) that her gigai can't look just like her b/c she just died & people would freak.

btw, you have a couple places where wrong name is used:

Orihime nuzzled into Orihime and turned around resting her head on Ulquiorra's chest.

"I thought you would of been inform by Rukia or Uruhara," said Ichigo," oh well. I'm back and that is really all that matters."
nypsy chapter 11 . 6/14/2011
you should let readers know up at a.n. before beginning chapter & before saying that there's a sexual scene that this particular chapter is rated M. e.g., 'CHAPTER RATED M' & then go into your explanation. lots of folk don't bother with the author's note, but they should be able to notice the 'rated M' quickly enough though. it should avoid complaints.

i luv that he proposed less than a day after she arrived.
Ulquishinee chapter 12 . 6/14/2011
Hahaha...ichi ambarrased himself! Though, i can't say that it was his fault since he didn't know that it was hime. Still funny! :D

I wonder how Tatsuki will take that Hime is alive! ? Or that she basically needs a new identity if she wants to live in the world of the living!
megumisakura chapter 12 . 6/13/2011
great chapter!
megumisakura chapter 3 . 6/11/2011
great story!

please update soon!
Ulquishinee chapter 11 . 6/10/2011
Aww that was so sweet! Though, i wonder why did you changed Hime's look! ? Also, i think that they both could have sex even in spirit form (hime being soul reaper and ulqui still an arrancar). Anyway, just a thought. Other than that you did a good job with the lemon! :)
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