Reviews for Give in to me
astridt244 chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
Another amazing one shot.

I remember that line in the book, for her to stay... That was one of the many points where I cried for Jacob and hurled the book across the room. Lol!
sweetness4683 chapter 1 . 3/25/2012
Another good one
Zayide chapter 1 . 2/23/2012
wow...that was...true vulnerability pouring out of him...sort of like he is telling her he imprinted on her
TrueLoverxx chapter 1 . 10/17/2011
Really loved that story! I liked it better than Steph myers version, I wish that's how new moon did work out :) great work! xx
starinthem chapter 1 . 6/26/2011
I read this because of the summary. I like those words he chose. So true about Romeo and Juliet and it really does resemble their relationship. Glad he fought hard for her that night and she chose him.
notashamedtobe chapter 1 . 5/27/2011
Woo hoo
i'm in the looney bin chapter 1 . 5/26/2011
love it!

so how it should've gone...tho' if it hadn't then we all wouldn't have so much fun with it! ;) x
jharv241 chapter 1 . 5/25/2011
Damn! I really wish that took place in the book! Because she definitely wouldn't have left to save Edward's sparkly ass! This was an awesome one-shot.
PBF chapter 1 . 5/23/2011
So... I didn't get a chance to review this when I read it yesterday, but when I read it, I knew my Bella would be in safe hands :)

"He left you once, Bella. I never have. I never will." - *sobs* I really hate what SMeyer did. I nearly threw New Moon across the room when they didn't kiss - THIS is what SHOULD have happened.

Wonderfully written. I love the way you describe things - so beautiful *sigh*

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NUNICHAN chapter 1 . 5/19/2011
This is exactly what she should've done that night! Congrats on having Bella make the right choice. I liked that there was emotion and love in their choice and not just the need for sex. Very good work.
BlackDiamond33 chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
Amazing! This is how New Moon should have ended. Seriously, who in their right mind would go save a vampire in the middle of a human trap set by vampires? Its all bullsh!t. I love how everything you write is filled with lemony goodness! Induces more jake filled dreams ;-)! Love you honey! *sexy smooches*
Jacob Lupo chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
Great one shot. Every time I watch the scene in New Moon when Bella leaves for Italy I feel so bad for Jacob. I found it interesting that you used their names so infrequently instead choosing to use he and she. A overall well written work.
AliMariexxx chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
Wow! and that is how New Moon should have ended!
A chapter 1 . 5/14/2011
very good one shot i loved it N i also love this version jacob and bella!
MistC chapter 1 . 5/14/2011
That's exactly how it should have gone. Bella staying and giving herself to Jake awesome!
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