|Reviews for Give in to me|
| 4Gracie04 chapter 1 . 6/29
Beautiful! That's the way it should have happened in the book. Bella belongs with Jake!
| astridt244 chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
Another amazing one shot.
I remember that line in the book, for her to stay... That was one of the many points where I cried for Jacob and hurled the book across the room. Lol!
| sweetness4683 chapter 1 . 3/25/2012
Another good one
| Zayide chapter 1 . 2/23/2012
wow...that was...true vulnerability pouring out of him...sort of like he is telling her he imprinted on her
| TrueLoverxx chapter 1 . 10/17/2011
Really loved that story! I liked it better than Steph myers version, I wish that's how new moon did work out :) great work! xx
| starinthem chapter 1 . 6/26/2011
I read this because of the summary. I like those words he chose. So true about Romeo and Juliet and it really does resemble their relationship. Glad he fought hard for her that night and she chose him.
| notashamedtobe chapter 1 . 5/27/2011
| i'm in the looney bin chapter 1 . 5/26/2011
so how it should've gone...tho' if it hadn't then we all wouldn't have so much fun with it! ;) x
| jharv241 chapter 1 . 5/25/2011
Damn! I really wish that took place in the book! Because she definitely wouldn't have left to save Edward's sparkly ass! This was an awesome one-shot.
| PBF chapter 1 . 5/23/2011
So... I didn't get a chance to review this when I read it yesterday, but when I read it, I knew my Bella would be in safe hands :)
"He left you once, Bella. I never have. I never will." - *sobs* I really hate what SMeyer did. I nearly threw New Moon across the room when they didn't kiss - THIS is what SHOULD have happened.
Wonderfully written. I love the way you describe things - so beautiful *sigh*
| NUNICHAN chapter 1 . 5/19/2011
This is exactly what she should've done that night! Congrats on having Bella make the right choice. I liked that there was emotion and love in their choice and not just the need for sex. Very good work.
| BlackDiamond33 chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
Amazing! This is how New Moon should have ended. Seriously, who in their right mind would go save a vampire in the middle of a human trap set by vampires? Its all bullsh!t. I love how everything you write is filled with lemony goodness! Induces more jake filled dreams ;-)! Love you honey! *sexy smooches*
| Jacob Lupo chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
Great one shot. Every time I watch the scene in New Moon when Bella leaves for Italy I feel so bad for Jacob. I found it interesting that you used their names so infrequently instead choosing to use he and she. A overall well written work.
| AliMariexxx chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
Wow! and that is how New Moon should have ended!
| A chapter 1 . 5/14/2011
very good one shot i loved it N i also love this version jacob and bella!