|Reviews for Just a Little Rough Around the Edges|
| Shiki chapter 6 . 3/26
Aw, wonderful title drop there at the end! It was a marvelous adventure and I thank you for this heart-warming and tear-jerking story...
...Is it me, though, or are your SOLDIERs a little too touchy-feely? I mean, I understand Angeal's a soft-hearted person at his core and Zack's still just a little kid and he's so darned loveable but...Meh, maybe I'm just being picky xD
Nice work and...I don't suppose the dragons feature in any of your other stories? That would be so awesome! I'll miss the little guys :(
As always, keep up the good work and I look forward to reading the rest of your FFVII fics!
| Shiki chapter 5 . 3/24
...Oh my. That was so touching...so heartbreaking! Kiran! I must say, she was probably my favourite D':
The writing was wonderfully smooth, as usual, and so absorbing! Keep up the good work _
...Now I'm going to go and cry for Zack :'(
| Shiki chapter 4 . 3/22
Just catching up on my reading and, as usual, your writing is amazing and the narrative is so smooth! I liked the structure of this chapter - if it were me, I'd probably have done as you mentioned in your Author's Note; I'd have had a bunch of short unrelated scenes throughout the chapter. But this is so much better for the flow of the story. And I liked Angeal's journal entries. Zack and the dragons are so cute xD
All the best!
| Shiki chapter 2 . 3/15
Sometimes, I think the way you write Zack is almost too innocent, but then again...a country boy of only fourteen would be quite naive about things, wouldn't he? In any case, your depictions of him make me want to hug the life out of him. He is so cute!
| Shiki chapter 1 . 3/15
OMG Cuteness overload? Very much so! This was so nice after the last fic I read - Brothers Under the Sun it was called, I believe? So refreshingly...hopeful, I guess :)
But it was very heartbreaking when Angeal promised that he would never leave Zack - and we all know how THAT turns out :'(
And yay! Finally, a multi-chapter fic of yours! I look forward to reading the rest!
All the best,
| Chaos66 chapter 6 . 8/1/2013
You like making me cry right? This story was over perfect. :)
| Chaos67 chapter 1 . 7/30/2013
Dude you made me cry in the first chapter! Don't take that as an insult take as a complement! That means your a good writer!
| Amarissia chapter 6 . 2/9/2013
I'm slightly emabrrassed by how much I cried during this story. I loved everything about it, the plot, the characterization, the detail of the battles and the beasts, and Zack's adorable relationship with the baby dragons. Bravo.
| Kaname1993 chapter 6 . 10/16/2012
Aww. This was such a nice story, it made me cry a lot towards the end though. I'm sad that Kiran and Herk died but I'm happy that Seph and Ness got to be free and learn to live with that other dragon. I kinda wish that Zack would have been able to see them again in the future but it's nice just to know that they got to live.
| Beloved Daughter chapter 6 . 9/9/2012
Such a cute story! Just wish this story also included the reactions of Sephiroth when he found out that Angeal and Zack were taking care of baby dragons... hehehe.
| hemillsie chapter 6 . 5/25/2012
Oh my god, this was amazing! I'm sorry that it had to end. And poor Kiran :(
I'm going to go make my sister read this now :D
| LunaLola chapter 6 . 2/20/2012
I wanted to wait until I finished to review because I felt the whole thing is completely brilliant. Your writing is so professionally composed, well plotted and flowed just beautifully. You put me to tears a few times, I'm not ashamed to admit. I really love how you know how each of the characters are feeling-even the blue dragon in the end.
It's writing like yours that gives me hope that there still are down to the core good authors out there within the website.
Thank you so much for the opportunity to read this and I look forward to reading your others as well. :)
| BloodTrinity chapter 6 . 10/5/2011
Heartwarming ending, though that doesn't mean it ain't a little sad D:
R.I.P for the unborn Herk and his brave sister
| KenshinandZack chapter 6 . 9/28/2011
Fantastic, it left me with a lot of emotions, one of the best reads i have ever had on here, keep it up, (i hope u branch of this :) ), and it had me tear eyed at some points and at the end,
good job and please continue whatcha doing :)
| ZacksSisterSarah chapter 6 . 9/3/2011
I LOVE IT! It made me cry-three times! (When Kiran died, when Zack said good-bye to the dragons, and the end.) T.T But I love how you wrote the characters and had character development. It felt more like a novel than a novella! (In a good way.) :D