Reviews for Distracted When I Spike The Punch
The Friggin Supernatural Feels chapter 1 . 12/31/2016
Lovely story! Just the right amount of whump. I don't like those stories where Neal gets hurt over and over and over again and it's just unrealistic. The only tiny piece of criticism I have to offer is when El told Neal she wished her husband thought the same way about her (that she was ingenious) - I disagree with that statement, because it's been proved many times in the series that Peter thinks the world of El, highly respects her, and values all of her input. Remember, she even helped solve a few cases when Neal and Peter seemed to hit a dead end and escaped Keller 's grasp using her wedding ring. Don't take it too seriously, though, you did a wonderful job!
Leonora Chris chapter 1 . 11/1/2015
Very good. I liked it. :)
oneandten chapter 1 . 1/20/2014
ok I remember reading this, although what was different this time I actually read those strange lyrics that went with the story...
wotumba1 chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
great story!

poor neal, having to go through all this...
can understand peter's reaction at hte end...
ferryboat George chapter 1 . 2/21/2012
I can sympathize with Peter's frustration. Great fic though :)
alli1 chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
I really enjoyed this-I always go for a good Neal whump story, and I love your Peter. Concerned and protective without ever going out of character. I would have loved for it to be longer, actually-like maybe a bit of Mozzie's mother-henning routine. That would be something to see. I think the little guy definitely has is in him!
puellascribit5 chapter 1 . 5/14/2011
This was fantastic! Great job :)
govgal chapter 1 . 5/14/2011
nice. Hated to see the bad guy walk away, but you're right. sometimes that's just life.
kenziecaffrey chapter 1 . 5/14/2011
Great story. Loved it!
FlapperFinzNoNames10201303 chapter 1 . 5/14/2011
I looooveed itt! Soo good! I always wonder why i love whumping my favorite characters as well but its not just the whump, is the h/c that comes after the whump more than anything so that's not as weird, right? It's wanting to see our favorite characters in a situation where the writers hardly let us see them in ]! Anywho, you write the WC characters like a master, I was fully absorbed in the plot, picturing it all. I wish I were back inside the WC world in such a exciting plot instead of in my room on a dreary Saturday xD. Thanks for sharing! ~Nayah