|Reviews for Through the eyes of a snake|
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/11
Naruto shouted as he looked down at the snake that still had not gotten rid of the proud smirk that was on her face. - Snakes can't smirk! This smirk made me really angry! Did you see any snake smirking? You didn't, right?
| DHG Za6uza chapter 35 . 3/1
Hey love this story please update.
| WeberCode chapter 35 . 2/27
| Tango Charlie chapter 35 . 2/26
Awesome story bro. I really like the NaruxKarin pairing, and you have used it perfectly in this story too! I get the feeling that nowadays such rare pairings are becoming more popular. As much as I like NaruHina, the idea of it being even remotely possible before timeskip is almost retarded. Almost as much as Femkyuubi or Hanyou Naruto level. And then there is the matter of Hinata turning more powerfull than even Sasuke or S rank ninjas by merely being Naruto's girlfriend.
Your story also has a nice blend of characters, namely Suigetsu. But I really hated the way you kilee off Zabuza and Haku, their characters deserve much much more. Also I believe that you should definitely close things up between Naruto and Ayame before ending this story, if not then it would leave a bad taste in the mouth.
I do hope that you will be continuing this story. Good luck.!
| Guest chapter 35 . 2/10
Awesome and original story
Looking forward to more
| Void chapter 2 . 1/27
ADHD- attention deficit hiperactive disorder (can't sit still)
ADD- attention deficit disorder (can't pay attention)
I have both (it royally sucks), so this might be helpful in the future!
| Guest chapter 35 . 1/27
Dude...awesome story !
Though i would stringly suggest that you put some feel good closire between naruto and ayame
Also make konohamaru warm up to naruto
| RikudoNaruto1 chapter 3 . 1/27
congrats on 100 reviews thought I would boost you a little :)
| RikudoNaruto1 chapter 2 . 1/27
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| YagerBaby1 chapter 7 . 1/15
Are the name of the chapters words to a song, or a poem you or someone wrote?
| Guest chapter 35 . 1/13
Hey bro...really nice story , thumbs up!
Though i have to point out some thinga that will make the story better and ... Well jst more feel good!
One of the things that i liked in canon naruto was the student teacher relationship between konohamaru and naruto...there is some comic potential there so look into it
Also i think you need to put some closure between ayame and naruto ... I family was one that treated naruto like something so they muat mean to him a lot and in the life of a lonely character like naruto, bonds forged are not easily forgotten so do something about it
Also, did ya really have to kill haju ! Man cool kekkei genkai and all...
| laughingfox31 chapter 10 . 1/13
I'm sorry but your a complete idiot. A DVD is not where you have too much energy inside your body. It is where the synapses in your brain don't fire in the right sequential timing and rate of firing. The hyperactivity is from the imbalance and lack of focus you unintelligent twit. Why don't you learn how two write in first person point of view and mabey research a bit before you start spouting off craps.
| flame55 chapter 35 . 1/11
This is great
| bcsclaymore chapter 11 . 1/8
wow, didn't expect that to happen with the ichirakus. never expect ayame to snap at naruto like that. different form what i guessed from her character.