Reviews for Through the eyes of a snake
Guest chapter 35 . 2/10/2014
Awesome and original story
Very intriguing
Looking forward to more
Void chapter 2 . 1/27/2014
ADHD- attention deficit hiperactive disorder (can't sit still)
ADD- attention deficit disorder (can't pay attention)
I have both (it royally sucks), so this might be helpful in the future!
Guest chapter 35 . 1/27/2014
Dude...awesome story !
Though i would stringly suggest that you put some feel good closire between naruto and ayame
Also make konohamaru warm up to naruto
RikudoNaruto1 chapter 3 . 1/27/2014
congrats on 100 reviews thought I would boost you a little :)
RikudoNaruto1 chapter 2 . 1/27/2014
boost 2
RikudoNaruto1 chapter 1 . 1/27/2014
YagerBaby1 chapter 7 . 1/15/2014
Are the name of the chapters words to a song, or a poem you or someone wrote?
Guest chapter 35 . 1/13/2014
Hey bro...really nice story , thumbs up!
Though i have to point out some thinga that will make the story better and ... Well jst more feel good!
One of the things that i liked in canon naruto was the student teacher relationship between konohamaru and naruto...there is some comic potential there so look into it
Also i think you need to put some closure between ayame and naruto ... I family was one that treated naruto like something so they muat mean to him a lot and in the life of a lonely character like naruto, bonds forged are not easily forgotten so do something about it
Also, did ya really have to kill haju ! Man cool kekkei genkai and all...
laughingfox31 chapter 10 . 1/13/2014
I'm sorry but your a complete idiot. A DVD is not where you have too much energy inside your body. It is where the synapses in your brain don't fire in the right sequential timing and rate of firing. The hyperactivity is from the imbalance and lack of focus you unintelligent twit. Why don't you learn how two write in first person point of view and mabey research a bit before you start spouting off craps.
flame55 chapter 35 . 1/11/2014
This is great
bcsclaymore chapter 11 . 1/8/2014
wow, didn't expect that to happen with the ichirakus. never expect ayame to snap at naruto like that. different form what i guessed from her character.
WalkersCrown chapter 7 . 1/8/2014
im am loving this one man so i will continue reading it. I am just waiting for naruto to meet the only known Uzumaki his age once again so that in the future the once great clan can get started again... because for me its either Hinata or Karin.
Unknown chapter 35 . 12/27/2013
This is roughly one of the best fics i have ever read, although you need to keep the updates quick, dont wanna let the fans get bored.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/27/2013
Nice story bro...stll the off pt for me was you killing haku...i mean dude he is the one who enforced narutos beleifs on all he thinks today... So i guess you didnt do his character justice...other than that fantastic story
Guest chapter 35 . 12/25/2013
This fanfic is one of the better written and more complex naruto fanfics...the way ypu described narutos eating style and how his body developed is something every author can think of trying...also the karin pairing was nice seeing as they both are uzumaki
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