Reviews for Through the eyes of a snake
JK10 chapter 9 . 6/6/2011
I must adnit i like this story alot. I don't see too many stories like this.I do hope Naruto makes it up to Ayame some how like dropping off some money to the family. i can see orochi in Naruto. Is this a harem i highly doubt it. hmm but anywhough i do like the portrayal of Naruto and karin. if it is a harem who would you add? dont matter. I do want to see eNaruto verses Sasuke keep writing. if you ever get a chance can u read my story
karthik9 chapter 9 . 6/6/2011
it is excellent chapter i look forward to future updates
saiyan prince1 chapter 9 . 6/6/2011
well well. i wonder how this will affect the story down the line... i wonder i wonder
Nero Strauss chapter 9 . 6/5/2011
I found the way you handled the wave arc to be much more believable compared to the actual manga. All in all it was a good chapter.
Cherrie-san chapter 9 . 6/5/2011
I have to say I really do like the unique way you are approaching Naruto, and his character in general. As for the pairing I was at first like 'Karin- her really, ew' but I have to say I really like your portrayal of her, it makes her a much more likable character.

I will be eagerly awaiting the chance to read more of this.
Anttolas chapter 9 . 6/5/2011
well i gotta say, the small wave arc makes me worried about Tazunas country, but to take the story a diffrent way makes it interesting, i will be seeing you next chapter:)
MKTerra chapter 9 . 6/5/2011
Clearly, you are indeed an idiot. I could major in English, and yet you still wordlessly refuse to take my advice for your writing skills. You are an idiot of the highest caliber. Apparently, with all the "ur awsome" and "yor stori is grate" reviews has gone to your head and this has given you an inflated opinion of your English abilities. Even I, one who is confident in his abilities in English, listens to sound advice. And yet, you fail to do so. I will be letting you know this every chapter from now on until it reaches a satisfactory level. Im not going to tell you what it is anymore, since I already have. Youve seriously earned my ire.
Spirina chapter 9 . 6/5/2011
God bless you that you didn t do the the wave arc. It was nice for once to see someone do something different. Continue your fic this way i like it
Hades252 2 chapter 9 . 6/5/2011
A great update, I like how you deviated from the Wave Mission and moved onto a fairly original storyline. Though, I wonder what kind of fallout the abandoned mission will have, Tazuna will most likely be killed and Zabuza will easily complete his contract with Gato, and if Gato tries to be greedy and sends mercenaries after him will most likely be killed and have his assets taken by Zabuza, which would leave the surviving mercenaries with nothing and would probably result in the village being ransacked and destroyed wiping Wave Country off the face of the Elemental Countries.(Omoi moment, sorry LOL!) Anyway, a great update and I look forward to the next.
noshadowone chapter 9 . 6/5/2011
To bad about not having a bridge him but it would of been a good mission if you had him take out zabuza for th3 bounty he banked and had money to help out ichiraku
bh chapter 8 . 6/5/2011
could you please change the teenage prostitution? There are other ways to do the scene that are more believeable than a father letting his daughter whore herself. As the father of two girls it made me sick. Hell she could just be dirty and tired from working two jobs
Lucy Ash Hawthorne chapter 9 . 6/5/2011
Max The Demon Wolf chapter 5 . 6/5/2011
Nice job
Uchiha Rai chapter 9 . 6/5/2011
that was a very unique way to do wave, i dont think I've ever seen it done that way
Lucy Ash Hawthorne chapter 8 . 6/5/2011
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