|Reviews for Birthday Gift Indiefic Comp Entry|
| Cageyspice chapter 1 . 9/20/2011
I'm team Eric, but I have always liked Alcide's character and there isn't enough of him in fanfic. I enjoyed this!
| blakes boogie chapter 1 . 7/23/2011
Those sneaky Fae... At least Alcide'e experience was pleasurable ;)
| Waiting on Summer chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
I liked this story when I read it for the comp. I really felt it did a good job of embodying the "indie fic" theme. I liked your descriptions of the fairy and how she appeared, with the butterflies over her head.
| EricJacobLover chapter 1 . 5/14/2011
Great! Good job on the American English too! I'm impressed. The only hiccup I saw was back "wheel". Americans say tire. But he could have some weird dialect. I hope they meet again.