Reviews for Torn Apart
H.G chapter 27 . 3/24/2016
Oh god,yeah that was creepy enough to make my heart almost having an attack!Incredible story really,I just can't stop reading and chapter 19 Lullaby is my favourite too
Can't wait to see who's going to the rescue,maybe the baby's mother?
Please continue as soon as you can,until them I'll be waiting
Take care
Charlie-Rose94 chapter 27 . 1/2/2015
So I just found this story and would really like to know how it ends I hope you get your inspiration for writing back soon :)
TwiPotter Girl chapter 27 . 11/16/2014
Are you still writing this story? I love it and I hope that you can continue to do so! Can't wait to see what happens!
Lisa chapter 26 . 9/18/2014
Please please please please please Update ! I can't wait !
nowhere chapter 27 . 12/8/2013
me : What's wrong with you? You're not update anymore
My friend : hey, relax. Give her time. She will finish it.
Me : when?
Kendall : soon.
Logan : well, in next chapter carlos will be a hero
James : do not know yet logie.. maybe molly and johnny take all of us with them and beat us death.
carlos : no, will protect you.
Kendall : I will protect you guy I'm a leader.
Carlos : no kendall. I don't want to see to brake. Not the fearless leader, it's too terrified to see you so miserable like in the Broken story.
Kendall : do not worry. Nothing will happen.
Me : are you sure? So you know the story? What happen?
Kendall : haha... of course I do not know.
My friend : just wait, okay
me : well I hate waiting.
RaindropsAndRosepetals chapter 27 . 10/22/2013
Lucy Case chapter 27 . 7/13/2013
Can you update a story called Broken pretty please update I love this story and the other story so please don't give up on the two stories please of torn apart and broken of the stories please your going to make me cry and never hardly ever so please update your stories of the stories I mention above
InsertUnoriginalPenNameHere chapter 27 . 6/8/2013
When I scrolled down and didn't see a next button, I freaked out. Literally. I screamed "WHAT?!" at the top of my lungs. my grandma asked me if I was okay. And im not! You NEED to update soon because this story has been AMAZING. I haven't reviewed a lot because I was so sucked into the story I didn't even have time to review, but... Wow. This story was amazing.

It was so heartbreaking the way Carlos had to slowly come back to his old self, and the littlest things made me smile. Like, when James' lucky comb went missing, or Mrs. Knights Fabio book, or Logan's medical book or Kendall's jersey or Katie's jacket, I somehow had a feeling Carlos was taking this stuff. And when Kendall was practically starving him for him to talk, realization sunk in that... They were that desperate and it was so heartbreaking.

When Carlos and Logan were in bed together reading the album, my heart melted. That moment is just too sweet for my heart to take! And Carlos finally talked...but just to say that James almost died because of the pills. When we also found out James was taking ecstasy I wanted to cry because...that's my Jamie! :(

And now... They're back. The people who have hurt Carlos so much are back and now holding them hostage in their own home and I'm really upset I can't find out what happens next :(

Loving this story, and really hoping you update soon!
InsertUnoriginalPenNameHere chapter 6 . 6/8/2013
Hello! I'm actually really happy I found this story because now I have something to read because I'm really bored. xD can I just say from what I've read, this drama-filled fic is really good? Like, it's amazing! And it breaks my heart to see Carlos react like that, attacking James when he only wanted to reach out to help him... And he's going to get tested to see if he was raped or not? Aw my poor Carlitos! DX Im loving this so far. :)
MaryHeart1D chapter 27 . 5/31/2013
random gal chapter 27 . 2/12/2013
Hey! Love this story sooo much! I was wondering...Plz plz plz could u update ur one-shot stories for carlos! I love that a lot, and i read some of the latest reviews which are adorable! Plz update it!
Tamberlyn chapter 6 . 2/5/2013
Omg I finally found this story. I read it a year ago then lost my phone. When I got a new one I couldn't remember the name of this story. I'm so glad I stumbled across it again. I do hope you up date it.
Guest chapter 27 . 12/15/2012
update please?
Mckayla chapter 27 . 11/15/2012
Please update pleeeeeaaaassseeee I really want to know what happens next. This story is really great sooo pleaaaaassssseeeee update
xScreamingFromBehindTheVeilx chapter 27 . 9/9/2012
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