Reviews for Harry Potter and the Alternative Tournament |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Muwahahahahahahahaa! Love love love this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! Love all the guest teachers that Mary Poppins keeps bringing in! Ooooh the glorious chaos! Love love love this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Muwahahahahahahahaa! Ooooh the glorious chaos that comes just by throwing Dumbles plans in the garbage! Love love love this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG This is glorious! Mary Poppins would never allow for a child in her care to be treated as anything but precious and loved. Dumbles better watch out. Muwahahahahahahahaa! Love love love this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE LOVE LOVE this! I am so glad I heard of this story from a Cauldron of Whispers! |
![]() ![]() ![]() My very well-developed vengeful side is squeeing at the thought of Harry having started his grimoire. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! for Sirius and Remus threatening Dumbles. You meant "Amelia Bones' people in London", "for some Veritaserum", "staying overnight for", "with the Potters' will", "kept Amelia Bones' staff" and "Lets your opponents know". |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked Harry and Fleur's conversation loads. I shrieked with laughter at "Oh, don't be a Granger". Ron Weasley has a brain that could be significantly danaged?! My very well-developed vengeful side loves the paragraph out of the mouth of Mary Poppins starting with "everything he does". "great-great-grandfather" needed hyphens throughout. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You meant "We could all lose our magic", "things are...calmer" and "bit of paté scraped from". I liked every syllable out of the mouth of Maleficent in the paragraph starting with "I find it strangely", especially the way she disparaged Snape as an alleged Potions instructor. I liked every syllable out of the mouth of Harry in the sentences starting with "So, just to be clear, Hermione". And every syllable out of the mouth of Neville in the sentences starting with "No, I think you've said enough". And every syllable out of the mouth of Dean Thomas starting with "I suppose that if it'd been Cannon orange". And Fred and George telling their youngest brother where to get off was fantastic too. I am shrieking with laughter at the sentences out of the mouth of Augusta Longbottom starting with "His intentions are to be dressed". Harry and Neville's conversation is sweet and very funny. I liked it very much learning that Harry has learnt to think things through. What a waste of hors d'oeuvres. But it made for a very satisfying mental pic. I shrieked with laughter at Augusta complimenting Minerva and disparaging Dumbles in just that one sentence. Yay at the thought of Augusta teaching Harry Wizarding politics, etiquette and history. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You meant "Goblet be relit", "cannot be relit until", "distinguished colleague", "or he loses his magic", "both of us could lose our magic", "about Amelia Bones' press conference" and "Mr. Weasley chose not". Yum! at the mental pic I got of a stern Neville Longbottom. I agree with Amelia Bones' opinion of the Department of Magical Cooperation. I loved Edward Spindle's "both of them pretty much hate" thought. Yay! at the thought of Harry and Neville's secret from Dumbles and Ron and Hermione correspondence. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pure fun. I love the dialogue and the accents |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, this is so good. Well plotted, written, and placed. Every situation is familiar. Tyanks for posting |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was absolutely fabulous! I enjoyed each and every one of the 'surprise' instructors, with Madam Mim quickly becoming my favorite. Wonderful writing style, it felt very conversational (like I was being told the story, rather than reading it, if that makes any sense). Loads of fun. I'm off to read the sequel. Thanks for sharing! |
![]() ![]() this has been a very enjoyable read, thank you. |
![]() ![]() Loving the story! Thanks for writing. |