Reviews for What You Wish For
irock chapter 20 . 3/28/2014
It was amazing in the next one you should have cody's

murderer make them fall in love since he was gay himself
RachelFaith00 chapter 8 . 4/22/2012
I didnt notice I'm at chapter 8! This story is AWESOME!
RachelFaith00 chapter 1 . 4/22/2012
The heart broken chapter 1 made me cry...:( you have tatlet.
mysilverrose12 chapter 1 . 9/19/2011
I love it u rock though it made me cry
tiger002 chapter 20 . 7/8/2011
So, we have a happy ending, Zack Cody and Max are mostly back to normal, Carey will hopefully be getting better, but you've left it open with the sequal ready too. I'll have to check that out too before too long. I recomend you proofread your chapters more of find someone else to help with that. There were a lot of spelling mistakes which made some things hard to read. For your first story though, this was great.
tiger002 chapter 15 . 7/8/2011
Aw, Zack finally knows! Yay some happiness here. But we still have a few chapters to go...
tiger002 chapter 13 . 7/8/2011
A number of spelling mistakes and stuff, and I'm surprised to see the twins carry Carey down 23 flights of staris so easily. I really like how Zack is trying to make sense of Cody still able to talk to him, but I can't blame him for thinking it's just his voice. Next chapter...
tiger002 chapter 12 . 7/8/2011
Uh...that was a surprise...

One thing to note, if you want to use profanity that's fine, or if you have a way to work around it, that works too, but censering it out I really don't like.

Great chapter otherwise, I'd write more but I have to see what happens next.
tiger002 chapter 11 . 7/8/2011
Wow, I really should have gotten to this sooner! But I will finish this story...eventually...

Great chapter here, and some fitting songs. I really love how emotional they were, though I think the official title for "How could this happen to me" is "Untitled" Okay, time for more chapters...
tiger002 chapter 10 . 6/8/2011
Well, I guess I didn't get the answers I was expecting. Oh well, this chapter seems to set up what you have planned next which I'm guessing will focus more on the supernatural. This is going to be good, but I have to wait to read more of it. Hopefully not too much longer though :)
tiger002 chapter 9 . 6/8/2011
A couple small mechanical problems, missing words and periods. Nothing too bad, but try to be more careful when you proofread.

The dream was really cool, and helps to push the plot forward. But what will Zack make of it? Did Cody have the same dream too? I guess I should read the next chapters and find out!
tiger002 chapter 8 . 6/8/2011
I know I've said it before, but I like how you are showing the two arcs here, with Zack and Cody, and how they are both going on. This is getting really good.
tiger002 chapter 7 . 6/8/2011
Whoa...this was cool.

Not sure that saying Barbra was jelous was a good word for it, maybe heart broken at seeing a couple starting to get together.

I really liked the part with Zack and Max, and the song really helped to get the emotion across. Great job!
tiger002 chapter 6 . 6/8/2011
I just have to say the comments about the funiral really got to me. I went to my uncle's Monday, and some of the family were talking about wanting it to be a happy occsaion. My mom has told me a number of times that she wants a celebration because it isn't the end. In fact it's a great beginning!

I like how you switch between Zack and Cody to tell the story. You're able to get into their minds with the first person, but still show both of them by switching. Very interesting seeing what Cody learned about the werewolf, especially that they can fly, and travel faster then teh speed of light. Doesn't go along with what I thought about them, but since this is your story, you can take it where you want.
tiger002 chapter 5 . 6/8/2011
Yeah...kind of forgot about this story. Sorry bout that.

A good chapter here, and I like how you write Zack's confusion here. I'm kind of surprised that Zack would go back to school, I think it would have made more sense for them to close the school for a few days after the shooting. Still, the part where Zack stood where Cody had died got to me. Good chapter again.
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