Reviews for The Procrustean Bed
Guest chapter 3 . 7/10
Is Bella a moron? She said that Edward was a client but that's not really true is it? He was a customer for sure but not a client, he didn't receive professional services.
Guest chapter 2 . 7/10
Pretty sad that one of Tanyas favorite places to be was...…..starbucks.
Guest chapter 3 . 7/10
How did Tanya leave Edward completely and utterly alone? Did she take his whole family with her when she died? No, I think not. You should really reconsider some of your word choices. Because she didn't in fact leave him "completely and utterly alone". What a fucking joke. Could you perhaps make Edward any whinier? All this over one of the Denali whores? Please.
Guest chapter 2 . 7/10
Its a bit contradictory. Edward said that Tanya shattered the walls he had built with a lot of stubbornness and determination but then says that he fell for her instantly. So which is it? Did she break down his walls in an instant or did she have to have determination and stubbornness?

Anyway, so Edward gets with Bella POST Tanwhore Denali? Nasty! You can say she was all these things, beautiful, smart, etc, but she will always be a gross whoring cumdumpster to me.
sue1zide chapter 35 . 7/6
Bella has as bad a temper as Edward, she's just not physical.
sue1zide chapter 9 . 7/5
This Bella strikes me as a gold digger a little. She spouts out comments about his wealth.
sue1zide chapter 3 . 7/4
Ages please?
adricastro chapter 39 . 6/14
Just re read this and I loved it so much again! You're writing is flawlesss!
cutie123r chapter 8 . 6/6
This is so good
tanseynz chapter 39 . 6/1
A very interesting story with well thought-out characters and several side plots enhancing the process. The open ending is clever - can see a sequel a few years later, given Esme’s irrational hate of Bella.
Edward is a bit like Esme, taking everything to extremes, but at a guess, Bella plus the rest of the family will keep an eye on him. Given his tendency to violence if someone gets on his wrong side, probably a good idea. Let’s hope he doesn’t treat Matthew and subsequent children the way Esme treated him. Teens can be sanity stretching!
Atwiggs chapter 39 . 3/30
I truly loved this Fic! The Epi was just ok but the rest of this story was so amazing and I loved it! I wanted to kick Edwards butt now and then, though. Good luck Andreea!
Atwiggs chapter 29 . 3/30
Oh noooo!
Atwiggs chapter 26 . 3/30
Omg! What a mess! Esme is such a bitch and she played them all by taking a few pills for attention. She needs to see a psychiatrist! But why would should ever try now! She’s spoiled rotten! She wants attention.
Atwiggs chapter 24 . 3/29
I feed like something bad is going to happen to the baby, pls don’t do that!
Atwiggs chapter 18 . 3/29
Oh noooo! I hate that stuck-up bitch! Edward should have told his mother to stay away forever! She needed to be scared that her son would leave her!
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