Reviews for Sweet Fracture Life
UNSC DESTROYER EDESHIMARROW chapter 7 . 3/4/2013
You better not make this a god dam Naruto Sakura pairing because if you do you will just be killing your own story!
UNSC DESTROYER EDESHIMARROW chapter 6 . 3/4/2013
Ya great chapter hope you kill off sakura & Ino cause those 2 are the biggest bitches ever there also annoying as hell!
UNSC DESTROYER EDESHIMARROW chapter 5 . 3/3/2013
Great chapter but hate the cliff hangers!
UNSC DESTROYER EDESHIMARROW chapter 4 . 3/3/2013
Naruto is so cunning, I love it great job with the chspter
UNSC DESTROYER EDESHIMARROW chapter 3 . 3/3/2013
Shits about to go down and Naruto aint taken shit from nobody and that is how it all ways should be!
Great chapter by the way!
UNSC DESTROYER EDESHIMARROW chapter 2 . 3/3/2013
Great FIC keep up the great work!
UNSC DESTROYER EDESHIMARROW chapter 1 . 3/3/2013
Great story you've got going here!
MasterYaoiCollector chapter 8 . 10/31/2012
this was great i hope you can add more to this soon

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Nessa671 chapter 8 . 10/8/2012
Please update soon.
BlueAurora chapter 8 . 7/20/2012
Luv ur story and the portrayal of Orihime. :)
Darkness-Over-Evil chapter 8 . 6/4/2012
YOU SON OF A BIT*H! HOW COULD YOU END IT THERE! ESPECIALLY AFTER ALL THOSE SPOILERS! Awsome story, at some points very touching as well. These are the stories that i enjoy the most - the emotional ones, with naruto and a mother. I think it's nice to see naruto with a family and one that cares so much, at first i was a bit : / when a 8 month old was using sophisticated vocabulary and showing such high intelligence. But i overcame that - and I'm glad that i did. It truly was awsome and a great story - some small minor nit pickings that i may have had but overall awsome story! I hope to see a update soon!

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Ermilus chapter 2 . 5/6/2012
The story is nice but them you have made Orihime willy cold against her friends. I know is your story but Ichigo is part hollow he would have understand even tatsuki. Overall is a great story update soon
Impstar chapter 8 . 4/13/2012
Not bad. I like the story, and femHaku please.

... Soul society was annoyingly OOC. Well, okay, not in general but Rukia, and Renji (at least if Renji really was her brother) were totally out of character. Rukia is no stranger to breaking the rules herself, why would she be so concerned? And seriously; Renji's thoughts towards duty and his prejudice outstrips his love for his sister? Come on. I understand it was a plot device, but surely there was something else that could be used?
ME chapter 8 . 4/7/2012
I like the way you stop using Orihime in a weak way ,because it always seems she crying all the time. I feel like she is finally going to realize her interior self and also finally realize what she really needs and wants.I kind of feel sad for naruto not been able to grow up with his father and also Orihime.I feel the thing that Orihime wanted the most is to have a family,but stupid people(ahhh Im to lazy to write out everybody that been mean to them-Hate them) had to get in if Ichigo really love her ,he would have been there to support her instead of throwing her nice to see how Naruto has grown along with Orihime.I think would not also dangerous if Minato kept watching from afar because someone might sneek on him from behind. I also have a feeling that Orochimaru going to play big part in this besides Aizen. Keep up the Good work! :) Im looking foward to the next chapter
Guest chapter 6 . 4/3/2012
Abar-a-i (Renji)

Yor-u-ichi (Shihoin)

Fairies (faeries is also used)

Heave-n (place where good people go when they die)
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