Стою это была прекрасная история,спасибо огромное.Вплетение реальных персонажей тоже было очень ловким.Спасибо за удовольствие.С любовью из России

Masterpiece! Excellent dialogue, storytelling, and character development.

Wow! What a brilliant saga!

Lord! That was fast!

Scary people for sure!

Brilliant tale!

This is a very well written and very interesting story. Really enjoyed it. Thanks so much for writing and sharing

TOO MUCH UNNECESSARY HISTORY IN YOUR STORIES

What an insult to the Darcy character, as the guest comment from August correctly pointed out, he's written as a manwhore.
A INSULT TO P&P

This was a very different kind of tale. Almost not a PPff except for the names and personalities. Normally I am not a big fan of this kind of ff, but this story drew me in. I absolutely loved it. When I came to the end, I was like nooooo you can not end the story so soon, I want more. Greedy me...

Thanks for posting. I enjoyed reading it.

Such a great story. My heat ached for poor Will throughout, that is why this is so great. Well done!

This is so wonderful. I wish you would publish it. I have been trying to get at the other version you mention but I am having no luck in registering at AHA and at all I see is the forum. Oh well…thanks for the story.

You wrote this so long ago. Are you still interested in feedback? If so, here goes: lt is great! I love off-canon stories. I am trying to get permission for AHA so I can read the unedited version. On to part 2.

What a convoluted story. Very boring and absolutely pointless, too many characters, nothing was concise or to the point.
Wish you luck next time!

Que triste el final un poco bittersweet, Will y Richard terminaron solitos. Y quien menos merecia a Elizabeth termino con ella. Este Darcy no me ha gustado para nada, su encuentro con la viuda fue bastante tasteless. Yo no tocaria a un hombre como este ni con un palito. Que repulsion, este no es mi Darcy, es otro Wickham.