Reviews for Possessed
jasonhunterdarkus2 chapter 1 . 6/19
why did you keep switching between first and third person that is my only issue
katraj0908 chapter 1 . 5/11/2016
I wasn't expecting this, I was more expecting like an Artemis POV of Percy's life sort of thing
Guest chapter 1 . 3/15/2016
Why wouldn't u continue it
Guest chapter 1 . 2/25/2016
The original story of Artemis and Orion is where Artemis hates orion kid, learn all facts before you set sail, heed that lesson seriously
Guest chapter 1 . 1/10/2016
Very good, continue the fanfic , I really wanna reed more mate, its a great fanfic
bandit420 chapter 1 . 3/28/2015
DEAFHPN chapter 1 . 2/3/2015
Wow really good a little bit out of character for Artemis did a great job with percy ! I enjoyed it made me smile haha; d

Thought your paragphs should be spaced For example when she says , "Do you understand me," and then her reaction at the part, when he nodded their should be a space between the two parragaphs everything seems jumbled together a bit. But over all its well written and interesting so great job.
Review037 chapter 1 . 10/15/2014
GO PERCICO chapter 1 . 9/30/2014
TheDarkKnight1991 chapter 1 . 9/27/2014
Was this a one shot? Please don't let this be a one shot! This was epic, I loved it! Please add more chapters! Pretty please! :D
AwEsOmEiZeR123 chapter 1 . 9/11/2014
This is REALLY good! Please continue it.
WhiteEagle1985 chapter 1 . 5/3/2014
Interesting one shot here!
RunningWithTheWolves99 chapter 1 . 5/2/2014
If someone else has mentioned this to you, sorry,but artemis's eyes are silver... SILVER not brown, overall good story tho
Guest chapter 1 . 1/30/2014
nice but I need more man!
captain guava chapter 1 . 1/18/2014
I love it. it is so cute
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