|Reviews for A River Between|
| westernem chapter 16 . 5/9
Just wanted to let you know how much I love your story :) just got done rereading it again! Also I don't want to sound pushy or anything since its been so long I'm just curious if you planned to finish this or just leave it be? Anyway thanks for leaving what you have up!
| jk chapter 15 . 2/23
I don't get why she's freakimg out its not like its a ducking dire situation ! Omg where is he ? I need to talk to him right now! 6let me guess shell see him where there's horizontal rain at 50mph..this whole story has been so predictable
| jkh os chapter 10 . 2/22
What is she fucking stupid? She has no money, living in a cottage on property they no longer own...she needs the money and she what? Fuck she's stupid..he just offered her the books for a date and she says no only to lose t
| Annie Larsson chapter 16 . 1/27
Awesome story! :)
| Unintended-u chapter 16 . 1/24
please please continue this, I need it..
| Guest chapter 9 . 1/12
I Love your slow seduction scenario... Colonel Edward and Miss blushing Bella, In the library, with candlesticks. Who is going to win this game?
| Lacramici chapter 16 . 11/6/2014
Please, please, pretty please, with cherry on top, finish this story!
| reve2weaver chapter 16 . 10/5/2014
Better to have loved and lost, than to never have loved at all...
I hate that saying, but only because I always think it makes love into an all or knowing sort of thing, which it rarely is.
But, I find it particularly appropos when it comes to fanfiction. I often read, my intrepid heart worried about the months that has passed since the last update, but it looks good.
And as the case may be, this is superlative, even when I read it so long ago, I knew I may never get that sweet sigh only the last chapter of a great story can bring: sorry it has ending, but so worth it.
There is nothing like fics that you love, and have become lost. Like falling in love with a soldier going overseas, or a summer love going to a college far, far away: you have to appreciate the time given, and know their life owes you nothing but what they shared with you, and that however brief, and ultimately unfinished, it was worth it.
So, despite so many great fics being finished, I cannot regret reading this story again. I have found that some fics, even completed ones, have lost their heart-shine over time. I guess in the beginning I was willing to overlook a lot of sins, given the rush of excitement in discovering all these cool and bridled writers, so much daring and raw talent.
But over time, and being thoroughly spoiled by greatness given freely, I have come to rethink what I once adored. I now look askance at pothole cliches, pointless angst, or asinine sex. Like a bad romance, I wonder what I saw in it at all to begin with.
But ... not so with this murmuring river of a love story. It positively glows.
I know, I know, I must be mad to read it again, knowing that there is no ending, but ... you're still worth it. Maybe ...one day... an email will come.
Some say that it's never too late when it comes to love, but then it must be undoubtedly true for a great story. We just pick up where we left off, and it's like time has passed at all.
| scholayolay chapter 16 . 9/16/2014
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! This is one of the best FanFic stories I have ever read, I'm so sad it's not complete! But this is truly an amazing story, so well written and the interaction between them had me fanning myself! Whew!
| Narcys-crazydaisy chapter 16 . 8/24/2014
Oh wow! I loved your story and couldnt stop ready but its not finished. If there is anyway in which you could finish this amazing story I would love to read it. Thank you so much. Narcy ;-)
| Oldenuf2knobeta chapter 16 . 6/23/2014
You write beautifully.
I really hope you come back and finish this one day.
So bloody romantic and sweet.
| KimiD chapter 3 . 6/21/2014
What a sticky situation... makes your heart hurt for her at her lose, but also for him, he is being very kind but her hurt and loss blind her to his kindness.
| KimiD chapter 2 . 6/21/2014
I wonder what went thru each of their minds thinking back to that first chanced encounter as children when each time they saw each other... *Sigh*
| KimiD chapter 1 . 6/21/2014
I love it already...
To let you know how I found your story... I collect the banners that the ladies in the fandom make for the stories. I collect them from Everywhere I can find them. One of my newer ones I discovered in the last download was your o/s, which I have already sent you a review of. I have set the banners as my screen saver on my laptop and that is how I came across your page.
I loved the simple way the 'children' discovered each other in this chapter. Sweet!
| dorothybert chapter 16 . 6/20/2014
Great story. I hope you feel inspired to finish it.S