Reviews for A River Between
durteelilsecret chapter 7 . 2/7/2012
1) loved the ... Proposition-wager.

2) Um, did the characters leave England, or is there a Forks in the UK? (many apologies for my American ignorance-really oblivion-oops.

3) I like the originality, but just out of curiosity, is Garrett based on anyone?

4) are you excited for BDpt.1 on DVD this weekend? (sorry, couldn't resist.)
durteelilsecret chapter 5 . 2/7/2012
Just a few things to clear up:

1) Does Bella still work at the (Mike Newton) store?

2) Is 15 hours a week livable for Renee & Bella?

3) What does Renee do all day?

4) Does Bella get paid extra to read, besides the free book?
durteelilsecret chapter 3 . 2/7/2012
Oh Bella, always the stubborn one. Gotta lov'er. From what I've heard, she gets it from Charlie.
durteelilsecret chapter 2 . 2/7/2012
You are doing so well for your first fic, I know mine is crap. This chapter gives me a very Ella Enchanted (the book version) vibe for some reason.
durteelilsecret chapter 1 . 2/7/2012
That was beautiful & so sweet. Thanks for the back story & incorpating into the story.
krassenka chapter 16 . 2/5/2012
I can only cross my fingers and pray that you won't abandon this jewel of yours
Blue Girl 23 chapter 16 . 2/1/2012
Great story. Very peculiar... In a good way. And very well written..

Tried to go to bed last night reading just a few chapters, and ended up finishing the whole thing... AND '5 Summers'! Completely unable to put it down, that's how much I enjoyed it..

Can't help but wonder though, is it finished..? I mean don't get me wrong, it works the way it is, but my selfish side craves more..

Oh, and Garrett..? What a total Mr. Wickham! The bastard!
OPatron chapter 16 . 1/20/2012
oh my goodness! amazingly written story. Great job!
Lilith Leazman chapter 16 . 1/20/2012
I'm sure this is on hold for a while, but I just finished chapter 16 and if there was ever a place to pause, this would be it. Wonderful reunion. _ Can't wait for more.
Kasa15 chapter 16 . 1/7/2012
I'm so glad they're back together! (: I'm really enjoying the story thus far.
sassy41 chapter 5 . 1/2/2012
loving the time they are spending together

maybe they will see if the fight between the two families was worth it
sassy41 chapter 1 . 1/2/2012
so far loving it and look forward to more
Blueelisa chapter 16 . 1/2/2012
Amazing story... I love chapter 16 and how Edward and Bella finally get together :)

I'm really looking forward to the next chapter :)
michangelina chapter 16 . 12/18/2011
Love this story will it be updated?
Debbie White chapter 16 . 12/15/2011
Great story keep it going! :)
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