Reviews for Invariably Intertwined
Guest chapter 1 . 4/23
in French, "sont" is plural. it's for "ils" and "elles". I think you shouldn't use "ne sont pas vous", but rather, you should use "n'est ce pas".
Guest chapter 2 . 7/29/2018
This is so fucking good, dude.
jennyVDL93 chapter 1 . 9/2/2017
Um, you might not like my comment, but it's really odd when you're at a start completely hostile with each other, but suddenly in one sex suddenly love each other... Sorry, but I like FrUK, but I just have to comment at this kind of story. It's just, love doesn't work that way I guess..
I don't F-ing care chapter 2 . 6/5/2017
these are great! As for a third, i would go with Austria and Prussia, or Turkey and Greece.
J chapter 1 . 4/14/2016
OodleNoodle chapter 1 . 1/1/2015
I seriously love the dynamic between these two here. It's so perfect. XD

Keep up the good work! o/
Potatopastry chapter 2 . 12/3/2014
I love both the chapters! You should do gerita for the third or maybe pruaus, or spamano? Idk do what you want! I love youre writing .
Black-Tie-Plum chapter 1 . 10/31/2014
This is my favourite FrUK Fanfiction EVER!
theSardonyx chapter 1 . 5/8/2014
First fanfiction.? Really.? Oh-ho. Pretty brave of you to write a smut for your first.

Write on.!
Ayans Dead Account chapter 2 . 4/13/2014
These are so good!
Omg, yes I love them!
The differences between the two relationships is so very clear and your writing is really beautiful!

As for the last chapter... Maybe a little, happy thing *coughgeritacough*. It would be another dynamic for you to write.
startwithbrooklyn chapter 2 . 3/6/2013
Prussia/Austria definitely, for the third!

I know this hasn't been updated in a while but there's so much you can do with the War of Austrian Succession.

Love FrUK, love RusAme, both are very historically accurate and almost canon pairings to me:) Great job with both, you made the sex wonderful and sensual even in the midst of an awkward premise. It's awesome that the sex managed to be so intimate and well done even though it was so difficult at the time! That's the sign of a good author.

Keep writing!

KatzillaM chapter 2 . 9/16/2012
Well I can tell you that 'ptitza' is the Russian word for bird, so you were probably right on ptichka.
Qrowbars chapter 2 . 8/15/2012
Hmm... Maybe the third between Canada and... Germany?
Frankinscence chapter 2 . 8/8/2012
Personally I think Prussia and Canada or Spain and Romano would be a good third pairing. :D. These are both really really well done. I liked both and I can't stand RusAme. Ever. But this was so well done that I couldn't not read it!
Guest chapter 2 . 7/6/2012
damn so hot.. but I would think that because america actually had advantage on the cold war he should top just saying xD
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