Reviews for Lily's Changes |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I can't believe that I did not discover this until now! (Rubs hands together and grins an evil grin.) And now I get to find out what else you have written. (cackles) And to think that looking at who is "favorited" by good writers actually results in discovering more good writing! Seriously, this is an excellent twist on the 'Harry goes back and fixes things' genre, but this one uses a very different way of telling the tale. Thank you (very belatedly) for writing and sharing this. I hope that you still get the reviews, since that's the only pay you get for this. Funny thing. I have no recollection of reading this before, but I couldn't post this on the final chapter because I had already posted there. |
![]() ![]() ![]() tf lily potter is sympathising with her murderer, without whom this whole f*cking turn of events would necer have unfolded? |
![]() ![]() The princess Bride movie first came out in 1987 14 years before the first Harry Potter film. That's 11 years before the first Harry Potter Booh was published. |
![]() ![]() Color me intrigued. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This could be really good! An angry redhead is a sight to behold! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent! |
![]() ![]() Although it seems correct to me that you base yourself on what would be canon, you should also know that most of the adults would be 6th and 7th year, if we count that Hogwarts has 1000 students, 6th and 7th year would make about 300 students, leaving another 700 as minors, almost double what you have said, I don't know how you did with such a low number to be honest... and the author can say what she wants, but it is difficult to conceive of 1000 students and a schedule capable of teaching all of them, especially with only one teacher per subject |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ugh the whole Snape arc was pretty lame. "Not regretting James' death" is the unforgivable part of Snape's actions that leads Harry and Sirius to sentence him? Not all of the murders or rapes in which he participated personally? Seriously, in the trial Sirius never even asked him about actual crimes. Only the Potters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() My goodness. This chapter is by far the hardest to read. The first half is pretty much one solid unbroken wall of text. And this chapter is looooong |
![]() ![]() ![]() The stupidest parts of this story are whenever Harry invents a bullshit reasoning to convince Hermione of his point of view. Literally every argument he makes is braindead, not to mention just an endless word-vomit, although every last sentence of exposition in this story could also be called that as well. Paragraphs that take up the entire screen are so not pleasant to read. |
![]() ![]() AMAZING. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ROFL, still a great story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So far it’s pretty good. After you get past the bit, with a ranting Lily on a soapbox, the story really starts to flow. I’m glad I decided to keep reading. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed reading this again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Rocky start , but overall very enjoyable! Thank you for sharing! |