Reviews for Patriarch
Vanessa Masters chapter 1 . 5/22/2015
Always love 'the talk' from a father about his daughter :D
Unnamed Wanderer chapter 1 . 1/15/2015
For some reason I was reading this with male Hawke's voice in my head. It really fits, too. Also, with the whole "daddy's little girl" thing I felt like everyone, save Anders, ending up getting a few years kicked off their apparent
age in DA2. Or maybe Malcolm Hawke is really just that intimidating?

I do wonder how Malcolm would react to his little girl's heart being broken by Fenris. (And not talking about in three ruddy years! Ugh.) I image it would be wildly entertaining. I wonder if getting a swift kick in the backside would get him to screw his head on straight.
csorciere chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
*laughs wholeheartedly* This is why I never brought the guys I dated home. I believe you are right about Malcolm and I am glad that you have kept him alive because I was myself have wondered what it would have been like if Malcolm had lived instead of Leandra. I almost wonder what it would have been like for the Marian and Fenris pairing, considering their how bumpy their romance was. Great story!
Marianne Bennet chapter 1 . 11/12/2011
When I was younger, my mother used to say that if I brought home any boys, she'd be cleaning her gun. Of course, the only gun in the house was a really, really old antique musket. But still she said she'd be cleaning it.

I stumbled upon the Bethany/Anders piece first but now I've read all three and adore them all. I also could completely hear Malcolm's VA from Legacy saying all of the dialogue you'd written for him.

In short, loved it.
Fortune Zyne chapter 1 . 10/11/2011
Heh, I'd rather they all lived. Preferably even that Leandra NOT GET HER HEAD CUT OFF AND SEWN ONTO OTHER BODY PARTS!
missema5 chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
I love your Malcolm Hawke. I wish my own dad was like this.
fifespice chapter 1 . 7/20/2011
love it and so differnt with malcom surviving
FlyingPigMonkey chapter 1 . 7/5/2011
boy, am I glad my father wasn't like this XD
naomis8329 chapter 1 . 5/21/2011
Oh lord this brought back memories of my own father. It had me grinning from start to finish. Poor Sebastian. I'd renounce my vows too and 1st thing in the morning lol.


Thanks for sharing

Take care

Naomi xxx
Cat-Tuong chapter 1 . 5/17/2011
Lol, he probably wouldn't. Being an apostate brings out that kind of character XP Anyways, great job, love it, poor Sebastian P Keep it up )
Pintsizedpsycho chapter 1 . 5/16/2011
Great story! Thanks for sharing?
MyNameIsAverage chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
Oh god, i simply adore this peice. It's brilliantly done!
Just Left of Center chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
*flails hands all over the place* !

There are so many things I can go babbling about which parts I liked the most, but at the moment I'm more or less reduced to simple squee-ing and just being a spaz.

I love how you portray Malcom and his protectiveness of his children along with his badass-ness (Why, oh, why Bioware, did you kill him? We could have had daddy-hijinxes). And lawl, I especially enjoyed that Sebastian was frightened by dear old Daddy Hawke. What boyfriend/potential boyfriend is not afraid of their love's dad? Especially ones that can and will kill you if you screw up. 3
x.Janele.x chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
Wahahahaha, your father actually did that? And I thought mine was bad. He'd pretend to be outside "weeding the lawn" to watch them drive up to the house. This was cute, well done as usual! Your writing is awesome.
anesor chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
I kind of wish you'd done these as chapters instead of disjoint pieces like other sites require.
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