Reviews for Separated
SmartGirl333 chapter 3 . 4/5
eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeishipiteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeishipiteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeishipiteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeishipiteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

My head exploded from the cuteness. This is second OTP only to Caveline.
SmartGirl333 chapter 2 . 4/5
*explodes from cute*
SmartGirl333 chapter 1 . 4/5
eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee i ship them

and rickkkkk you are so in character

faved
Andy chapter 1 . 6/1/2014
OMFG this is so awesome

please ignore sm(spelling mistakes)
Andy chapter 1 . 6/1/2014
WOW! (it is) AWSOME!

I love it
Inferna Blossom chapter 3 . 2/22/2014
Awwwwwwwwww! I love it!
Inferna Blossom chapter 2 . 2/22/2014
Awwwwww... so sweet. I love it! And really can see that pair working.
Inferna Blossom chapter 1 . 2/22/2014
Awww... So sad!
iSpazzyKitty chapter 3 . 6/28/2012
I really like this. It's very cute! :D And you managed to keep them all in character while still having them make legit conversations with each other.
LyricalCasualty chapter 3 . 6/3/2012
OH MY GOSH! THAT WAS AWESOME! PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON! I LOVED THIS! Will Chell talk in this?
ohmigodimcrying chapter 2 . 5/20/2012
I'll have you know, dear sir or madam, that it is REALLY FRIGGIN DIFICULT to get me to cry at a piece of fiction. It's not that I don't feel the emotions of the story, I just don't cry.

But...

"Why does my heart hurt?"

Tears. Bloody tears. aekjfrtewrrk. I immediately scrolled down and wrote this review. Because my eyes are wet, and that never happens.

I will now finish reading this IEUHTRQLWEBQWBRQLEWBRLEWBR of a fanfiction :,D
LadyFluffieh chapter 3 . 6/17/2011
two words: D'AAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWW

Every action of the two stood out so perfectly in my head-this is beautiful and possibly even more cavity-causing than the last chapter. 8D

I do not regret drawing from your fanfic one bit. w
LadyFluffieh chapter 2 . 6/17/2011
You put two of my favorite Portal things in here:

Spacosity Rick 333

Rick was so in character I swooned. It's probably the best fanfic written with him in it that I've ever read. w

During the hook scene I thought of the music from Monsters, Inc. when the protagonists were swinging on the doors. It fit well.

And the ending of this chapter EEEEEEEEE~ 3 SO SWEET AND CAVITY-INDUCING!

I might have told you this already, but I printed everything from this "threesome" just so I can read it over, and over and over again~
LadyFluffieh chapter 1 . 6/17/2011
This part is so sweet and sad, but at the same time it seems like it would actually happen!
DangerousMuteLunatic chapter 3 . 6/13/2011
One. Word.

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