Reviews for Digging for Diamonds
error404-known chapter 5 . 5/13/2015
This was really good, even though, I'm not familiar with this show it seemed really good. And what I could see this was well written :)
I hope you get some kind of inspiration to try to update :3
error404-known chapter 4 . 5/13/2015
o.o oh no, why didn't you bring back up D;
error404-known chapter 3 . 5/13/2015
What the hell is wrong with that teacher o.o
So she did the gas leak and are sending threatening notes to students.
error404-known chapter 2 . 5/13/2015
Hmm, so they are trying to see if their teacher is some kind of spy? Hmm, spy teachers.
error404-known chapter 1 . 5/13/2015
This took so long. Although, I have no idea what is going on, but it sounds interesting :) Stark, is that a oc or is he from Iron Man?
Guest chapter 5 . 10/19/2014
2 YEARS ARE YOU FOR REAL?! Inlovevtjus story btw
Guest chapter 1 . 1/21/2013
this is very interesting
AbbieCole chapter 5 . 8/26/2012
OMG this is AMAZING! :D Please update soon!
mockingjay2012 chapter 5 . 8/26/2012
please please please update as soon as you can! loving it :D
mockingjay2012 chapter 4 . 8/26/2012
love it please update soon! :)
Guest chapter 1 . 7/26/2012
Oh, is this based on, whatsthename, Face Time or something? No, Face Off. It's really good!
angelwhovian chapter 3 . 5/17/2012
I am really enjoying the story! I am a big m.i. high fan. Hurry up and write the next chapter please. I can't wait much longer!
I love brave people chapter 3 . 12/23/2011
please write next chapter!

i love this story and you are a really good writer

:D xxx

p.s i love oscar's character their should be more fanfics about him!
anonymous.mystery95 chapter 2 . 10/16/2011
WOOT WOOT! sorry, but i really like your stories and you updated. Yay. A little excited. Cannot wait the next installment of the story, it is hectic.
Ashlyn-i chapter 1 . 6/30/2011
I'll be honest with you, not the best of starts. I think the idea behind this is great and it can go far, BUT things are happening too must remember, you are telling us a story, not just stating what people are saying and doing. There is no introduction other than a chapter title. You go straight in with the fact that Frank has supposedly commited this robbery.

Try sliding it in by describing it, because I get this impression from this chapter that describing is something you are afraid of is no description of the new teacher Mrs Green. What does she look like? What clothes does she wear?

Don't be afraid to expand above the basics "this is what this person said" "this is what this person did". You had no description on how other students reacted when Oscar walked in late. There is no way that Mrs King would have let him get off with that so lightly, particularly when he only shrugged and refused to say more. How did Avril react? What did other characters say? I hope this doesn't discourage you, I do think that you can do a lot, but I just feel that this chapter needs a lot more substance to it, particularly for an introductory chapter.

Think about it, work on it. I hope to see more soon!
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