Reviews for Tears of a living doll
mama4dukes chapter 1 . 5/17/2011
I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes. Isabella is so naturally submissive-will she eventually grow a bit of a backbone? Can I have Jasper bathe me? I'll be good, I promise. Love you, love your fic. XOXO
Ella Whitlock chapter 1 . 5/16/2011
LOVE IT! You did a wonderful job with the way this story has started out. I like how you put Bella's back story in the beginning throught a flashback to a conversion, but were also able to keep the rest of the story flowing nicely.

Well done,

MyLoveCarlisle chapter 1 . 5/16/2011
OMG, this story is so good! Love it! Please update soon...
Tunz N Cruzn chapter 1 . 5/16/2011
I like this. Looking forward to seeing where you take it.
TillITryIllNeverKnow chapter 1 . 5/16/2011
As always,your work stands on it's own -unparralled. Isabella's submissiveness is so intense here, that one can truly see her lookin, sitting, posing, as a child's doll would. Quite a feat! I hope you continue this piece...the possibilities are endless. I've been rather bogged down here, but know that I'm up to date with ALL your work and loving it as always.
Sunshine chapter 1 . 5/16/2011
AbbeNormal chapter 1 . 5/16/2011
I don't know what more they could have asked for, this was perfect.

I enjoy your writing, as you well know. I read everything you write, and I enjoy it to the fullest. I hope you continue with this one, it would so be worth it.

I am sorry they didn't want it. It truly was wonderful.

OPOSOJOJ chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
Loving the story, though I wish Bella put up a little more of a fight.
raven13 chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
that story was amazing i hope that there will be more. its very different then the others i have read and do hope to see more
Analitica chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
I absolutely loved everything. I cannot wait for the next update
Cullens Darlin chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
This story is absolutely amazing...I hope you continue!
danielleXD chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
I really love this story and I can't wait until the next chapter is posted!
DestanyRose chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
WOW I have yet to find one of your stories that I don't love. This pairing is one of my favorite. I can't wait to see where this story will go.
janjan2009 chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
I'm lovin this kniky fic! Can't wait for what's next! Please update soon!
Truthdust chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
as usual I enjoyed the new story
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