Reviews for Patriarch II
Adara's Rose chapter 1 . 3/11/2012
Hey you,

I found this story, and its prequel, to be very sweet, and I would have adored them if it werent for the pairings. I am rather stuck on my versions of Serah Hawke and Bethany, and in my head the only way to pair them off involving these two boys is Hawke/Anders and Bethany/Sebastian - I cant imagine the other way around. Sowwy.

Hugs,

Adara
FlyingPigMonkey chapter 1 . 7/5/2011
i 3 Papa Hawke! you should make a full story with him!
Ryoko Metallium chapter 1 . 6/1/2011
I love over-protective daddy Malcolm!
naomis8329 chapter 1 . 5/21/2011
Once again Daddy to the rescue lol. What a hoot. Loved it. I do wish you'd consider a full story using Malcolm rather than Leandra as the surviving parent or even with both.

Poetic licence is allowed I reckon especially for a good story. It wouldn't take it too far from the game and then we'd have fun with Daddy and Gamlen too.

Thanks for sharing

Take care

Naomi xxx
Aeirlys chapter 1 . 5/19/2011
I'll review this one because it's the first I read and I'm in my 'yay Bethany!' mood

but all the pieces of this little AU really are adorable!

your Malcolm Hawke is incredibly funny (and I love sebastian reaction when Anders is mentioned XD)

Fenris/Carver, I wouldn't have put much thought in this couple but you did this well (it's still strange to see Fenris taking charge but well... I suppose that with Carver it's to be expected... I swear sometimes I wonder which one of him or Merril is the most oblivious one (well..; Merrill might still win that one )

anyway it was really cute and pleasat to read !
x.Janele.x chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
I like your Anders! You should play with him more often. 3 Finally got around to favorite authoring you, you're awesome! Find my prompts next, imo. :D
BirdieInATree chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
Yup, Papa Hawke is pretty badass. He reminds me of my dad, only instead of fireballs he uses a Winchester...
xxHPxxGWxx chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
I love all your stories, whether they are Anders!fluff or Sebastian!anything. Lol. I couldn't think of a name for my next Hawke, and I named her after you! Lol. Not Celeste, but Lywinis! Again, thank you for such awesome stories, and a request? MOAR Seb limericks please! Thank you!