|Reviews for Fly and Prosper|
| Don'tMessWithAFangirl chapter 1 . 5/26/2011
I love the concept, but I am concerned for Alfred's characterization...
He seems kinda MEAN in this!
I know Alfred's oblivious, but he really does mean well, and he's not THAT obnoxious.
Maybe if you tone it down a bit, it would improve your story.
Also, please continue this, because it sounds really good _
~Don't Mess With A Fangirl
| Death-Sama01 chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
Love it, can't wait for more!
| Jayshock chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
Hmmm will there be any prucan by chance
| AidouHanabusafan chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
Um hi! Keep it funny but make sure the characters have depth; also, drama is good.
I prefer long stories with lots of arcs. Maybe you could do one of them? That would be really good! Make is slow though.
| Megan chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
Sounds good, but keep it slow and long. Also, be careful with your OC- make sure she doesn't go Mary Sue and also make sure she doesn't interrupt anything. She's not a Mary Sue, but be careful!
| Jamie chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
I'm a girl btw
Depressed Mattie! :O ohnoes! I hope he cheers up. Pretty interesting,you know! Siobhan's an anachranist? I hope that doesn't mean she's in the IRA (yeah, we know bout them in the USA too)
Feliks should be like, a model or something, or a designer. And Kiku should be a doujinshi person!
| Oxenstierna D. Yuki-Rin chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
Well, this is certainetly going to be a fun school. Here's who I predict will be what:
Estonia - Son of a multi-millionare computer guy
Feliks - A model
Taiwan - A model and Chinese film star
Kiku - Son of a manga artist
Denmark - Son of a cable company president. XD