Reviews for Poison
BellaRukia chapter 1 . 3/7/2015
Such an interesting fic. It always called my attention that obdurated worship that Loly has for Aizen. But he's so mean, so cruel... There is no doubt she was attracted to him because it would be precisely masochistic to venerate who means us harm. I liked your fic, for some reason I'm always attracted to twisted relationships that show some sadism. It has been an interesting reading :)

FleurMiroir chapter 1 . 2/22/2015
This was a very dark piece yet very well written. Though I can't personally picture Aizen doing any such things, I wish you'd still write about these two. I like to read about the effect Aizen has on people and how far he can push them.
Icecat45 chapter 1 . 9/4/2014
While dark themes and sadism aren't normally my thing, I really enjoyed this fanfic. And the song you picked matches this fic perfectly.

I really liked your descriptions of how Aizen makes Loly feel. He can make someone feel like they're the most important person in the world, but he doesn't mean any of it. What really makes this fic dark is that even though Menoly realizes that Aizen is using them, in the end, even she can't resist him.

And kudos for portraying this relationship as seriously twisted and unhealthy, which is exactly as it should be.

You're very good at writing dark fanfics, and I really hope you write more of them in the future.
Crazy Packers Fan chapter 1 . 7/29/2013
Wow, very hot story. And very good description of Loly's passion for Aizen.
ladyrose16 chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
Weird but great...
SayoShihoinXKohAyamerei chapter 1 . 11/9/2012
Aizen's a sick, twisted bastard. I wouldn't be surprised if this actually happened!
hey hoe chapter 1 . 5/27/2012
Update! Hot!
MissxBlackxKat chapter 1 . 5/19/2012
I really feel like Aizen did that shit to them too. Kinda sad but hey, they pledged their selves to him so tough, but loly is just plain obsessed as fuck with Aizen. She has always been the rude obsessed whore in the anime and manga... -_- lol but it was still ├╝ber amazing.
Rocka.NGW chapter 1 . 2/18/2012
I am now like officially scared of Aizen! And he's a fictional character!

Loly is extremely desperate for Aizen's attention if she would go through that!

Overall really good. I really don't want you to finish because I'm getting alittle weak in the knees from all this talk of blood...
Serene Eloquence chapter 1 . 11/16/2011
WOW! Intense is the only word to describe it! I'm not a fan of Loly myself; I suppose your disdain for her is slightly responsible for you creating this. With the red bed, red robe and blood, I'm sensing a theme here: Aizen must be a vampire! He's too compelling not to be. And its so obvious what Aizen was watching, his secret stash of XXX movies :P No, he's too sophisticated for that. Realistically, it was probably lost footage of Ichigo as a boy :/ This is definitely one of my favorites!
sokkenai chapter 1 . 9/24/2011
Great job on this Sariniste, I can imagine this actually happening behind the scenes! :)
bleach1 chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
Dark and beautifully written, and very aptly titled.
OtakuZEO chapter 1 . 8/31/2011
I've wondered about Aizen and Loly too this story does give me a good idea of why
Queen of Torture chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
Aizen is a scary's hard to believe he lost thw war. Love the story muchies!
Kelsey L Leigh chapter 1 . 5/21/2011
I think it's pretty heavily implied in the canon that something like this happened between Aizen and Loly. I always went off the theory that they were in some sort of sexual relationship, or that Aizen had used her sexually at some point. On these grounds I don't object to AizenxLoly as such - it's only when authors try to write them as being involved romantically that I start to get...well, annoyed.

Anyway, I thought this was very in-character for everyone, even Menoly, whom no-one really knows much about. Although I don't really go in for the sadomasochist stuff that much, the scene does have a certain sensual appeal to it.

I also applaud your choice of song. Very apt, in this case. I'd be interested to see how you continue this, if you do - I get the feeling that short story smut will be the most you'll be able to do, but feel free to prove me wrong. ;)

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