Reviews for Patriarch III
Guest chapter 1 . 12/2/2015
Personally, since I don't think Carver swings that way (though fenris is so hot, ohmygod) and it was a good fic, I ship Carver and Merrill. No one ever writes about Merrill unless it's with Hawke. It's my Patriarch verse headcanon :P.

P.s. the way you write Malcolm Hawke is so awesome, I'm just over here like wow. Love heeeeem
Pygolampida Ankathi Alepou Dai chapter 1 . 12/22/2014
Wait! We don't get to hear the TALK that Papa Hawke gives Fenris? ... But... But... That's not fair!

(Also, cute poem)
SnowHelm chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
This was fun to read. I'm really starting to like the idea of Carver and Fenris. That is one meal I would like to be a fly on the wall at.
Adara's Rose chapter 1 . 3/11/2012
Hey you,

This story was very sweet (and hot) too; it was interesting to see Fenris as the dominant partner. For some reason, Ive always considered him a virgin, prodivind of course that Hadrianus didnt take advantage, but thats beside the point. Loved your idea of having him be the experienced one, and Carver the virgin. :)


wolfvonbiele93 chapter 1 . 1/26/2012
Yay~ The first inkling of slash in the Patriarch series and it's Carver/Fenris XD I'm so happy, you have no idea...I hope you continue with this series some more!
FlyingPigMonkey chapter 1 . 7/5/2011
Great job for your first slash. Hope you decide to write more. The poem at the end still has me smiling!
EvilValenStrife chapter 1 . 5/25/2011
So, my face is stuck in a smile thanks to this fic. I loved it and I hope to see another!
naomis8329 chapter 1 . 5/21/2011
That was a great deal of fun and I enjoyed it. Poor Carver, poor Fenris lol. A great piece, well written and thoroughly enjoyable.

Keep it up honey.

Take care

Naomi xxx
arysani chapter 1 . 5/18/2011
Um. So. Carver/Fenris. I never knew I wanted it or liked it until just now. I'm quite surprised. The pleased kind of surprised, of course.

And love the bit about "the Look" making you confess all your sins. Plays right into my personal headcanon that Carver is the worst secretkeeper ever.
mialove01 chapter 1 . 5/17/2011
Will ther be a Patriarch IV, with the so promising super? I wonder so. Celeste-Sebastian, Anders-Bethany and Carver-Fenris all sitting under the Oh so Evil looks of Malcolm Hawke! that would be funny.
Chasind Desire chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
I thought it was well done, I recently tried my own hand at slash. While it isn't my cup of tea, it was certainly an experience. Its good to see more Carver though, and not squicking it with his siblings!