|Reviews for Kuwurasetai no|
| Annabell chapter 2 . 10/26/2013
Xd, I love this... it's bth funny and lemony!
| Counting Sinful Stars chapter 2 . 1/28/2012
Oh dear. Atem! Stop being a jerk! Anzu is a bitch. HOLY RA! Niiiiice. XD they are gonna be sore in the morning.
| Counting Sinful Stars chapter 1 . 1/28/2012
HOLY RA! *drools and has a major nosebleed* *passes out from bloodloss*
| Lateen chapter 2 . 11/19/2011
Another great story! Loved it! I still love the way that Atem is :P
| Angeldrkfire chapter 1 . 8/18/2011
This is one of my favorite all time lemons. Seeing Yugi drunk like that is so much fun! You did a wonderful job with it :)
| DragonFire Princess chapter 2 . 6/27/2011
Love the story, Hope you'll update the story... ASAP!
| RyouSyki chapter 2 . 5/30/2011
loved it! u should should do somthing like that about ryou and bakura cause right now they're sooo my fav yaoi couple.
| angel61991 chapter 2 . 5/28/2011
i have afew ideas... they havent done it against a wall, bent over a table yet, in the shower or tied . u can add toys 2. i can come w/ a whole bunch of stuff... but thats only cause i read 2 much smut.
| Rogue of Freedom chapter 2 . 5/27/2011
MAKE IT YUGI IT WOULD BE DEAD HILARIOUSE FOR HORMONES!LIKE THE 4 AM THING YA ROCK!(v).
| edvy8 chapter 2 . 5/23/2011
Vy *nosebleed*: Fuck damn! THAT IS AN AWESOME LEMON AND STORY!"
Edward facepalms: Great! You gave the pervert ideas for his stories! Just great!
Envy smirks: I personally enjoyed it. Makes me want to do the same with chibi.
Vy: Please! Please! Do the idea! I love this story and I want to see the mpreg. Bring on the yaoi and family issiues! whoo!
| Coolaloo chapter 2 . 5/22/2011
AWESOME LEMON! :D Thank you for the up-date, these lemons are soooooo hot. - I hope you make that idea of yours come true! :D
| Celty-chan-rpfb chapter 2 . 5/22/2011
| Gamer551 chapter 2 . 5/22/2011
oh! I hope its a mpreg about these three because I find them so cute and adorable! XD
TT Yugi scared me...
Yugi: Im sorry...
No! The damage has been done... TT I never thought you would be so angry... DX YOU EVEN HURT ATEM AND YAMI!
Atem& Yami: *sniffles*
I loved this chapter! AMAZING! I cant wait for the next chapter, or your next story TT Which ever your going to be working on...
Hehe You like making me hate Tea don't you... XD
| Darkspine29 chapter 1 . 5/16/2011
Let me start by saying your English is fantastic. Not only are you able to write normal English well, it seems you are also quite fluent in drunk English, a dialect I still have trouble with.
I love how Yami gets to be the focus in this chapter. Most Mobiumshipping stories I find tend to center mostly on Yugi, never really delving into the relationship between Atemu and Yami. This was certainly a breath of fresh air. Yami just makes such an adorable uke it's hard not to fall in love with him here.
One thing I did have a little trouble with was where and how they were positioned at certain points.(personally I think thats the hardest part of writing a threesome.)In your other story I had no trouble keeping track of them so I think it's just the extended length that gave me trouble.
I can't wait to see what you do with the boys next, chapter two can't come soon enough.
| Alice Edogawa chapter 1 . 5/16/2011
erm... a little confused here, isn't Yami and Atem the same person...?