|Reviews for Las Cosas Pequeñitas|
| Sesshomarusama3 chapter 1 . 11/29/2013
this is amazingly beautiful! i loved it all from begining to end!
| annea101 chapter 1 . 9/13/2013
| Karlina101 chapter 1 . 3/10/2013
Oh my god this is amazing! I'm really hoping for a continuation of this! XD
| Flynne chapter 1 . 12/27/2012
Okay, I figured since I keep coming back and reading this story over and over, I should get around to leaving a review. ;) I really love this! Very well-written - I love your descriptions: "But those things were just trivia, random bits of memory fallen like bright scraps of ribbon from a package he'd never bothered to open." You have all four turtles' voices down very well. I can "hear" them speaking as I read. Love that you were able to draw on your own experiences to add to the story. You did a great job filling in the gaps for what happened to Leo while he was gone, as well as his reasons for staying away so long. And I like the way you have things between him and the guys, particularly Raph - understandably awkward but not bitter and antagonistic. It makes me sad when I read stories where they seem to truly dislike each other.
Every time I read the part where Leo tells them about Miguelita I laugh out loud. And I simply adore the way you wrote Mike. Every time he speaks, it's perfect, and he's completely adorable. I just want to pick him up and squeeze him. You kept his personality intact while giving him a lot of depth and, dare I say, intelligence. LOVE the way he knows exactly how to get his brothers to interact - again, particularly Raph. Thanks for sharing this story! (And I'm glad to know you still plan to post new things...good writers should keep writing.) ;)
| j-lin2000 chapter 1 . 12/2/2012
I loved this story. Especially the part where Leo named the pig after Mikey. Maybe you can write a sequel
about the actual party that is going to be thrown.
| Tarume chapter 1 . 9/29/2012
This is... AMAZING! Oh my garsh. I can not come up with anything constructive to say, but just know that i am a fan of this awesome piece!
| MalibuShaggy chapter 1 . 3/7/2012
This left me with lots of feel good vibes. I could feel for their situation and even had to laugh out loud at times. Great!
| Daaaawwwww32.5 chapter 1 . 1/3/2012
I love this! simple as ok not that simple but yah the main idea...heh
your story is extremly amazing and can actually change someones mood
I believe the way you made them all seem a lil akward but them slowly warm up to each other
The way you mad Leo-bear*hears an angery growl and a sword being drawn out and sweat drops* er I mean Leonardo ,_''' hehehehe, seem out of it and his,hardly ever seen, sense of humor and how Mikey *hopes he won't kill me cuz I can't spell his full name right* was like hiself but then he was serious at the same time
O.o bugs in burring in skin? *whispers like Fluttershy then shouts loudly* EEEEEEEEEEEEWWWWWWWWWWWW ! gotta agree with Mikey there *shudders*
I laughed my self off the chair and ended up laughing my throat raw when I read about Leo's pig then when I read I reason behind the name oh man Poor Mikey*snickers*
The parts about Raph really made me aaww and think the He does care bout his brother! and that he alsoo seems to have a shy side and worring side
I love absolutly love those nicknames given I happen to have a cat named Klunk ,my sister named him, *mutters something bout the cat is the only good thing her sister has ever given her* and now I want to call him Klunky cuz off the nicknames
I would really like to see um well some thing with Raph and Leo-b*growl again from dark corner* er I mean Leonardo mabye after the party trying to understand each other or mabye some of the lesson Mikey and um LEONARDO or some thing...eep...
Wow...I wrote alot sowy if I talked or wrote your ears off or eyes out um...keep up the marvolus work ma'am..
| princessebee chapter 1 . 11/18/2011
This. Is. Wonderful.
Pure brotherly awesomeness.
| Tsukimine12 chapter 1 . 11/2/2011
pretty cool story!
i did love it x3
but there is a mistake at the end
is no "Al final" it is "El fin" or just "Fin"
well... i would like to make this review longer but i have to go!
my sister is screaming
read you later!
P.D: sorry for my bad english, i use to know alot, but in this years i just start to forget it -.-
its so sad TTTT
| Rialla chapter 1 . 9/26/2011
I absolutely LOVE this fic! It is w/o a doubt my favorite -difficulty reconnecting- fic out there. I'd love to see some more fics of Leo's time in the Jungle... how he got the scar Mikey stared at, some adventures with the lap-pig... Some 'Ghost' adventures... It just seems fantastic
I shall be watching your fics eagerly
| Angel chapter 1 . 6/25/2011
This just made my effin' heart explode from fuzzy fluffy lovey-ness! I'm in LOVE with this story!
| Kallasilya chapter 1 . 5/28/2011
Um, okay, I’m actually a little embarrassed about how long this got, but I can’t help it! Consider it merely as a documentation of my responses as I read. :P
You make it extremely hard for a girl to write anything that even remotely consists of constructive criticism, you know. Seriously, I'm looking with eagle eyes and I'm struggling to find anything that I don't like.
Mikey's indecision with the skateboard is a good way to show how he's grown up over the past couple of years. And I love how he uses humour to break the tension, and get Leo talking. (From one scientist to another, I can’t help but snigger at your visualisation of the “scientific community”).
I like the way you have Leo using present tense when he first starts speaking about his jungle memories, like he’s let his mind slip back there and is re-living the experience.
Giant maggots? Ew. Ew. EW. I’m also not grossed out easily by nature, but I am with Mikey on this one.
I LOVE that you can write Leo with a sense of humour. Even if it’s understated and rare. I think it can sometimes be a difficult aspect of his personality to bring out, but you managed it perfectly in this.
On the topic of pet names for Klunk – my god, if I ever get a cat, I am definitely stealing Mr. Snugglepants. That’s the greatest cat name ever. XD Or maybe I could get my own pig too! Pigs are totally snugly!
“The turtle in blue scanned his eyes briefly. "I'd be honored," he answered at last, bobbing his head in a slight bow, and it was so unnecessarily formal, so very Leo, that Mikey couldn't help but smile.” - Leo is an adorable, awkward dorkface. That is all.
The bit where Mikey starts to get teary made me wibble in the tea room during lunch break as I was reading this. How embarrassing.
And then you broke the emotional tension at the perfect time - letting Mikey show his vulnerability and then pulling it back to the Star Wars reference. Nice.
I can see Mikey being a natural at learning languages, possibly because he loves to talk so much. And really, REALLY, Miguelita is the cherry on top of this storycake of awesomeness.
You can always tell when a story is a good one because it becomes hazardous to read it in public places, due to crying and/or raucous laughter. This story managed both. I actually had to skip the part with overly-cautious-British-Leo –and-Raph because I was reading it on the train home from work, and I remembered how much it made me snort with laughter the first time I read it.
If I had to pick a favourite moment, I think it would be this:
“Leo wiped his eyes, and shook his head. "Nope, there was just Miguelita," he said. His hand was still resting companionably over Mike's shoulders. And even though Mike was still pretending to be offended, he didn't shrug it off.” – Argh. It just says SO MUCH, without really saying anything directly at all.
And of course Raph immediately manages to steal my heart from the very first sentence where his presence is even hinted at. Naturally. You knew that would happen.
Here’s the first typo I’ve noticed in the whole thing: “ He continued to pull him out towards the living area, with Raph only resisting feebly—either he just wanted [TO] get whatever it was over with quickly” – that’s as close as you’ll get to concrit from me, I’m afraid. I have no concrit, only PURE JOY. What’s the Spanish word for ‘perfect’? Please insert it here. :P
| Winnychan chapter 1 . 5/23/2011
Amazing... it his all the aspects I loved most about the 2007 movie. Your portrayal of Michelangelo, in particular, was really spot on. This was the Mikey that fans could only glimpse in the deleted scenes - an explanation for all the forced goofiness that did make it onto the screen, reinterpreted as a manic escapism and denial. His somber attitude in the deleted scenes reinforces this idea, and I love seeing all of these concepts further explored.
But let's not forget the beautiful imagery within Leo's memories of the jungle! Wow... I LOVE it when fans have done research to back up their work, but nothing beats real world experience. I don't know about the accuracy of the Spanish, since I can't speak a lick of it myself, but the lovely descriptions and poignant observations were 100% believable.
Finally, I adore the idea of Leo's pet pig. XD Thanks for sharing this with us!
| Strgrl4eva chapter 1 . 5/21/2011
And that my dears is what I call a story! I loved it and when I say that I mean that I LOOOVED it. This story just completely made my day. Definitely the best way to spend 17 minutes. I think that the fact that you actually spent time in Costa Rica made this story that much more believable. There was possibly not one moment where I found myself bored or uninterested. I loved your attention to detail, I loved how you got the brother's to sort of crawl out of their shells for once. And I absolutely love your Mickey and Leo. :) Thanks for this.