|Reviews for At a Glance|
| EiraLuna chapter 1 . 3/5
I don't expect that at all...his blindness is really shocking...I love how Haruhi develop at the end, this is really good and heart warming
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/16
Oh I totally called the blindness! But I liked this retelling of the first few episodes of Haruhi. No over complicated magic god powers, aliens, or time travelers. Just a cynical blind kid in high school meeting the most interesting girl there. I saw him not believing in the aliens or anything else from when I realized his condition. 'Seeing' is believing and all that. Well written though. On my list of favorite one shots
| Inara Seraph chapter 1 . 7/6/2013
I liked this. There were enough hints for the reader to guess.. the title, Kyon's astonishment at Haruhi's obliviousness, the constant attention to the sound of footsteps. A neat little one-shot.
| Sammy Holzbein chapter 1 . 4/5/2013
Type your review here...
| flairina chapter 1 . 3/8/2013
And yet somehow, I didn't expect that at all. For a while I thought we were leading up to Kyon being revealed as an angel or something, and then nixed that after it was revealed it had to be something observable. I had a couple other guesses, but those got nixed too. Kept me guessing, to be certain. Interesting story, well done.
| the weird kid chapter 1 . 3/5/2013
This is really great! I like the concept of Kyon being blind and Haruhi, who is usually very good at noticing small details, somehow not noticing. Even though it's unlikely you will continue on this idea, I would like read a continuation on this story.
| Flurrin chapter 1 . 11/7/2012
Really good job. If I have one complaint, it's that the dialogue hesitates and stutters a little too much. Other than that, this was a joy to read! I love this kind of story.
| A Mistake chapter 1 . 10/19/2012
All the signs were trickled down into the story slowly but realistically that this feels more of a detective story than anything else (and heck, I don't think it's ever easy to write an enjoyable mystery story, and you managed that too). I did figure out what Kyon's deal was when Nagato realised it, but it did not make the gradual unreveal a lot less fun. Neat! Everyone else's characterisations was acceptable, though, considering the adjustment that was necessary for the story to still work with the difference. Thanks for writing. This will always be one of my favourite stories.
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
Heh. You kept Kyon's blindness a secret incredibly well
| SXR123 chapter 1 . 9/30/2012
I've got to admit, the blind thing just... blew my mind. I continued reading this and as it went on I always wondered "what do they mean when they say she hasn't figured it out yet?" and kyon getting lost in town kind of threw me astray to. but man, when you dropped that bomb... I think it's clear to say I thoroughly enjoyed this story!
| Troglodytarum chapter 1 . 9/29/2012
...Blind? At first I thought badass kyon was just badass kyon, then thought badass kyon is Vrolik syndrome kyon, but when it said blind kyon, My mind was soo full of fuck. But yet I think haruhi was a bit OOC. But seeing how this was your earlier work, and the fact it was experimemtal I think it matters not. Im gonna look up the sequels and other stories now, but this... by far one of your best, besides Outcast, all your stories seem to have diffrent kyons... oh and i was wrong about you wtiting in your dreams. But that person who did write it has a very similar style to yours, and not to mention your stories have a lot of... other similar things, however ill stop now, and great job, also I have yet to see any spelling or grammer mistakes in your work, so rare for a fanfiction author. A
| Dummy Perception chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
I never guessed what the real situation was until Taniguchi told me...
And it would have fumed me if that didn't touch Haruhi enough to make her a tad more humble.
Wait... does this imply that as Haruhi wished for that 'interesting' to happen three years ago the accident happened at the same time?
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
This story is amazing!
| Teucrian chapter 1 . 6/2/2012
That was a pretty good story. I hadn't realized before the actual reveal what the situation was, so thinking back on all of the situations in a new light was pretty fun. Good writing!
| lazyguy90 chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
A truly fantastic idea.
Although god forbid Haruhi ever read a Daredevil comic book.
Great work on this.