Reviews for Myths
cedricsowner chapter 4 . 5/21/2011
Solid transitory chapter; feeds the interest in what's going to come. I like that you're giving Carmine space to shine a little!
cedricsowner chapter 3 . 5/19/2011
Still moving on strongly - I'm not sure about Ames being called "Montgomery", I'm not such a big fan of real life being worked in like this, but that's personal taste. The idea of the twins' gift being split, that's great! Wonder what they saw when they saw Guerrero...
another-all-nighter chapter 3 . 5/19/2011
Hi! I love this story. It's very original and interesting. I hope you update soon! :)
cedricsowner chapter 2 . 5/16/2011
This is really creative and the conversation between the twins definitely served to build up excitement. Two small things: Does Ilsa wear glasses? Does Guerrero drink coffee? (Because he's always shown with tea...) Ames' retelling of the ancient legend had me rolling on the floor, that was so right on, I loved it!
cedricsowner chapter 1 . 5/16/2011
variatio delectat! Variety is the spice of life - I really like this and I hope you continue soon.