|Reviews for Giving Way To Dusk|
| Guest chapter 15 . 10/25/2020
Wow, this is a great story so far! I stopped reading fanfiction for awhile, but with midnight sun out, I’ve come back craving more. I’m enjoying this story so much!
| Sean aka JJENKS chapter 26 . 9/8/2020
I came here and read your work after finishing Midnight Sun and craving more reading with these characters in this world and it absolutely did not disappoint. I liked the changes to Stephanie's story - honestly I think the thing I hated the most about breaking dawn was the morphine bullshit. Like seriously? No-one gets to see the pain that bella is in? I hated that - there should have been some sacrifice - ! Like, there was just no sacrifice. Oh sure! I want these characters to end up happy but seriously there was ZERO SACRIFICE whatsoever. She got the best of every world, she got a daughter, she got to keep her relationship with her parents and she got immortality WITHOUT THIRST. UGH that actually just pissed me off. Like for the entire series we are being taught about the ANGUISH of the changing and the PAIN of year one newborn where your thirst is impossible to resist. But for NO REASON AT ALL - bella just skips all of that. I liked in your two stories how bella actually went through an actual immortal adolescence. It was hard! And it should be hard. And then in this story at least edward got to see the pain of her transformation. And at least in both stories her death was faked so there was some real emotional sacrifice. But the thing I love most about the twilight saga is the physiology of the immortals and the way the powers work and interact and you did a BEAUTIFUL job of that - ESPECIALLY in this work. I loved the new character Sarah- like she is basically cannon for me now - her power is something that would definitely exist in this world and the POWER she had was remarkable to see. I was wondering if perhaps Jacoc would imprint on her in the end. But i loved seeing the realistic approach that was taken with her power and edwards power and Chelsea's too. It was just all done really really well. The only thing I still crave to see is a story in which Bella is overcome with thirst and kills a human - possibly Charlie. That would be great to see- how she grieves and feels guilty for that and how the cullens react and rally around to support her. I know you wrote these stories ten years ago and will probably never check this review but I'd read any other story you wrote in this universe! Well done
| Kemq chapter 26 . 9/25/2019
| Loli Milk chapter 1 . 3/2/2019
It's the return of Assward. (I'm staring to see a pattern)
| Tommy14 chapter 26 . 4/1/2018
Thank you for sharing this wonderful story.
| Guest chapter 26 . 12/1/2017
I loved it, thank you.
In order to review previously reviewed story, I have had to do the second round as a guest!
| Guest chapter 25 . 12/1/2017
| Guest chapter 24 . 12/1/2017
| Guest chapter 23 . 12/1/2017
| Guest chapter 22 . 12/1/2017
Decision taken out of Edward's indecisive hands
| Guest chapter 21 . 12/1/2017
Evil, cliff hanging woman...
| Guest chapter 20 . 12/1/2017
| Guest chapter 19 . 12/1/2017
Off with her head!
| Guest chapter 18 . 12/1/2017
Bella is becoming more self aware
| Guest chapter 17 . 12/1/2017
A piece of the puzzle at last