Reviews for This Ongoing Competition
Inkfire chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
This was really lovely, especially the end - so pretty and poetic. Wonderful job!
slightly so chapter 1 . 9/11/2012
Excellent compromise! Love all your stories do far!
gingerbritishgypsyelf chapter 1 . 5/17/2011
Though it's a bit wordy, I really like this. My favourite bit is when you describe how she's holding the reflection of the stars in the water of her hands. I wish I'd thought of that; it's really clever.