|Reviews for You Can't Always Get What You Want|
| The Potato Lives chapter 18 . 56m ago
best story ever keep typing!
| Philodice chapter 1 . 3/1
I really wish you had more updates for this.
| yuiop chapter 18 . 8/31/2013
| MelodyPotterSnape chapter 18 . 5/23/2013
I almost want your Nessie to read about Bella's life. lol
| MelodyPotterSnape chapter 8 . 5/23/2013
I think the phone thing should be monitored. I mean if you were being stalked you couldn't have cell cause they could find you. On the other hand if they found you anyway you would need that phone. modern tech sucks sometimes.
| horsesrules chapter 18 . 10/24/2012
write more its good
| leemikki chapter 16 . 9/14/2012
Your characters are really hard to like. :(
| leemikki chapter 2 . 9/14/2012
Good story. Deserves more reviews
| Theoneandonly Mrs EdwardCullen chapter 14 . 8/14/2012
I would say unobtrusive behavior doesn't look like Bella's and Nessie's.
It's seems Bella had lost her common sense during her chang. Who would let a small child lead a negotiation with a lawyer? Right, the same person, who let her spoiled deceptively brat ran over herself.
Sorry, but this Bella is a sad joke.
| Theoneandonly Mrs EdwardCullen chapter 9 . 8/14/2012
Hmm, I would the events in this chapter are on the same level like Bella's cliff diving and Elisabeth wasn't present, so Alice should have seen something and the Cullens shouldn't be clueless of Bella's actions.
| Theoneandonly Mrs EdwardCullen chapter 5 . 8/14/2012
Wow, nice twist in the plot.
| Theoneandonly Mrs EdwardCullen chapter 3 . 8/14/2012
Bella is a tough cookie in this story. I like it.
| Theoneandonly Mrs EdwardCullen chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
| mwjen chapter 18 . 7/23/2012
Great to see this continued. Wow, Nessie's turning into quite the little sociopath isn't she, someone should point out the fact if her the Cullen's had lived like nature intended or had been as quick to kill, as she seems to be, to protect the secret her mom would have been dead long before she had a chance to be born.
| Guest chapter 18 . 7/21/2012
Thank you for this line: "That is so not my problem... He's the one who broke up with me and left. If he can't handle it, he can keep staying away from me."
All through that debate with Alice, and partially the end of last chapter, I was seriously concerned this would be forgotten. Edward is not allowed to be possessive, no matter how he feels about Bella. Mystical or Chemical Bond be damned, he exited himself form her life, that was his decision. Regret it all he wants to, but he still acted on that decision and now must pay for that. I'm all for Bella's side in this argument with Alice, she is putting her foot down just as she should and demanding what is her due. It is not unreasonable at all. That line above was perfect.
That was cool, Hiring Lily, Jasper and them talking Martial Arts... I would LOVE to see Edward try to save Bella and then get shocked seeing her dismantle another vampire with training. I'm sure most Vamps are all about being fast and strong, but add to that serious melee training. It would be cool to see.
LMFAO at the story Bella created around the "Accident". I'm really not just saying that, was literally laughing my ass off, loved it.
Rest of the chapter was nice. I like Carlisle's part, though, again, I'm not on board with his attempts at insight. I was under the impression that Edward and Bella did meet the point about him hurting Dean. She flipped it back on him, telling him it was his problem and hee needed to control it.
You get repetitive sometimes, but maybe you need to be.
Okay, great chapter, I'm thrilled to see it up. I had long ago abandoned this story, but I saved the link because I still enjoy it. Thank you for picking it up again.
I'm looking forward to my next alert.