|Reviews for Denial, Denial|
| Shoshana chapter 1 . 5/19/2011
This is beautifully written! I'm SO happy I came across this story! I love how you wrote Gray - I find it IC for him to deny something 'intimate' so much like his 'crush' on Lucy. I just love it! Hope you write more
| Veronica-tan chapter 1 . 5/18/2011
for someone who thinks thhat Grey is hard to write, i think you pull it off really really well! i can honestly picture this as an episode yknow? its really great stuff! hope you make more! _
its so amusing that erza's a sweets-person despite her strong attitude! i cant stop smiling whenever i read about her eating her cake and 2nd plate of dessert! :D
i LOVE the itty bitty Natsu x Lisanna! happy is referring to lisanna when he asks natsu about the confession right? hope i read it right. and when lisanna chokes on her drink, i was thinking that maybe the girls were talking about Natsu & Lisanna as well that time. SO NICE! heehee
| Ookami Tsubasawa chapter 1 . 5/18/2011
Got to agree with Erza, I think the denial's cute. :)
| IamDomo chapter 1 . 5/18/2011
I agree with everyone who reviewed! You did a tremendous job with this! BRAVO! :D
*** Tsuriboshi ***
I can't help but point this out, but Gray DID admit that Lucy's 'pretty damn cute' in the early part of the fic, in the 2nd paragraph. Just because Lucy's appearance are 'much to his liking' doesn't mean he likes her (although he did in this story YAY!). I'm just saying - a person can comment that someone is cute/handsome/pretty without having to like her. Peace!
I hope Sechskies does a sequel! This is HANDS DOWN the best GrayxLucy fic I read!
Your INSTANT fan,
| tsuriboshi chapter 1 . 5/18/2011
That's so cute of Gray. And witty of Natsu and Happy. :))) But, isn't this a bit contrary to what Gemini said (Looks are much to his liking/Pretty damn cute)? Well, I guess that's why Gray is SO in denial. XD
Sequel! Sequel! I'm really looking forward :3
| Pastelissimo chapter 1 . 5/18/2011
I'm more of a Natsu x Lucy fan, but this is BRILLIANT! Your way of writing is witty, and hilarious. I could honestly imagine the whole story happening in my head.
I just hope, that if you do a sequel, there won't be any Natsu x Lisanna. I despise that pairing more than spoiled milk :/
| Chubi-chan chapter 1 . 5/17/2011
Why in the world did I typed SAKURA? I meant LUCY! So sorry... My brain's not working correctly right now. Harhar. XD
Still awesome job! This can stand alone as a one-shot but a sequel's nice too! VERY NICE! w
| Chubi-chan chapter 1 . 5/17/2011
I really love this story! You did a great job writing it, and I can't help but smile at the idea of Gray being too defensive and Sakura being cutesy clueeless!XD I hope you write more stories like this and have a fun time writing them. Keep up the good work!
| MIKUNIN-NIN chapter 1 . 5/17/2011
Sweet rutabaga pie! This totally made. My. Day. :D And I just WOKE UP!
Beautiful writing as usual (I read your HitsuHime CRACK! fic & left you a signed review years ago), and I adore your sense of humor.
I cannot stop reading this. It's hilarious, and in character, and well written and my sides are aching. Oh jeez... I just love this soooooo much!
The dialouge is very in-character and the ending is just so perfect. I can just picture the expressions and the like.
This, by far, is the BEST GraLu fic I've read. I don't think anyone can top this so soon! :))
Write more, please? :3
| Love virus chapter 1 . 5/17/2011
hahaha... happy is funny, poor Gray, hahah XD, nice story
| missmelon12 chapter 1 . 5/17/2011
This was amazing! I love how it flowed and how in character everyone was!
I would definitely love to see a sequel!
| Arisa20 chapter 1 . 5/17/2011
This is a really good GrayxLucy story and i really want to read the continiue!
Please, make an efford, for the sake of the GrayxLucy fans...PLEASE!
| zagoorian athena chapter 1 . 5/17/2011
Sequel! Yes! Might I suggest something that shows Lucy reciprocating Gray's feelings, perhaps? Hihi. :3 But seriously, this was a very well-written story. No complaints about Gray's character since it was epically cute of him denying his obvious feelings for Lucy. Cheers to a job well done! :)
| ANA-BaNaNa chapter 1 . 5/17/2011
u had me at "gray watches lucy sometimes". THAT EARLY! i was squeelin & fangirling by d tym i read d 2nd sentence! .
i luv how erza, natsu & happy gangs up on gray & gray getting defensive! & d ENDING! zomg, i LOVE!
i hope hope hope u make a sequel! eveyrthings written perfectly & u wrote NOT ONLY gray but everyone totally IC (so no worries about that). cheers! :D
| Altaira Azulis chapter 1 . 5/17/2011
I LOVE IT! SEQUEL, please! (:
I think you did a great job on Gray's character, I can really imagine him doing this in the manga! :D