Reviews for once and future lovers
jk chapter 12 . 3/3
I love how you have bella tell us one thing then change it all up now with the flashbacks and it makes it more bellas fault their not together...fucking stupid
jk chapter 10 . 3/3
so he was fucking bella and out of nowhere he was fucking rose and then just started ignoring bella...his so called best friend...ya he can fucking die now
jk chapter 5 . 3/3
wow, the way Edward talks about rose when they were younger...about he was THRILLED to have his whore pregnant and marry the bitch...I don't think he ever fucking cared for bella at all.
so here the deal, why is bella still acting like a love sick fucking little girl? isn't she a fucking adult? she should start acting like one and leave assward alone...who in the fuck would want his used up ass after hes been with rose anyway? fucking gross
jk chapter 4 . 3/3
I'm confused...in chapter 4 Edward says that bellas green bikini made him a man...and bella says I'm pretty sure we didn't have sex till later...but bella said that Edward tried out his newly learned moves on her...so HE wasn't a virgin...and he went and kissed rose the next day and ignored bella...
why the fuck is bella talking to assward right now? he fucking used her for sex! and he was with someone else at the time too...then he what just ignores her and pretends it didn't happen? fucking gross by the way!
jk chapter 3 . 3/3
after the way bella talked about assward I sure didn't expect bella to go out to his garage and act all buddy buddy the way she did...sounds like Edwards a whore...no thanks
guest chapter 23 . 12/20/2016
I knew from the moment Bella was so obsessively gossiping to Renee about Edward that I was going to hate her character. Like nails on a fucking chalk board, I mean even Jessica Stanley would be more tolerable.
Bella really deserves no HEA. She's an unapologetic, immature home wrecker who has no consideration or regret when it comes to her actions. She's completely obsessed with coveting Edward to the point that it's turned into an immoral, insensitive bitch. I hope karma gets both of them.
OMG chapter 23 . 12/20/2016
This was by FAR the worst Bella (especially Bella) and Edward I have read. Hands down. Holy fuck.
I wanted to bash Bella's head in so many times. I actually despised her character and hoped she got what was coming for her. She was self-centered, bitter and completely selfish and just the worst kind of human being anyone could ever be. J
Guest chapter 23 . 6/9/2016
I don't know how I feel about this Edward and Bella. I really want them to have a happy ending because well...they love each other
But they're such awful awful people omg, Edward is a cheating coward, Bella is a bitter grudge holding woman and they're both fucking insecure and it's driving me crazy..poor rose
treacherously chapter 23 . 4/12/2016
well re read this and just remembered that there is no ending, but i choose to believe that rose ends up leaving edward. she is the one who is sick of his shit and deserves better, which she does get. also edward and bella figure out their mess and get together for real. the end.
YJ22 chapter 23 . 2/12/2016
I can't wait to read more!
Melodia73 chapter 22 . 1/16/2016
The fact that i am so angry with these two imbeciles speaks volumes for your writing. I honestly cant find it in me to feel for them. At the end they deserve each other
Guest chapter 22 . 12/30/2015
So she's pregnant and doesn't know it yet? Eating more, vomiting and strong smells like the citrus her mother was peeling. I'm disappointed I really don't believe her or Edward deserve a happy ending.
Guest chapter 8 . 12/30/2015
Edward's a cheat and a sleaze, Bella's a deceitful despicable excuse of a woman these two clearly belong together! And now I'm guessing Esme is going to be playing match maker along with Bella's mother who hasn't chastised her daughter yet for her advances towards a married man.
JanuaryLestrange chapter 21 . 12/2/2015
Such a good story. I hope you do come back and finish it.
myadryk89 chapter 23 . 10/31/2015
I really love your writing. Your stories are so unique.
If you decide to post another story, I sure as hell will read it.
You're amazing.
Thanks
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