Reviews for once and future lovers
GypsyDreamer134 chapter 22 . 4/2/2013
I'm excited to see how these two end up, its great your posting again, update soon pleeeease! :)
Darcyfan14 chapter 22 . 3/28/2013
What a stressful relationship she have.
Darcyfan14 chapter 21 . 3/28/2013
Welcome back!
Guest chapter 22 . 3/25/2013
I always have a really hard time trying to be compassionate toward this Bella. It's not that I don't like her or judge her because of her being 'the other woman' in this case. I just get so fed up with her immaturity and selfish attitude and neediness in general. I understand partly why she is this way, but at the same time I can't help but think, "Grow the fuck up!". I do want her with Edward though- and he's not exactly my favorite Edward characterization in fanfic- but I do like them enough to hope they get their HEA eventually. You're definitely doing a good job avoiding stereotypical one-note characters, even if they aren't all that likable a lot of the time. I mean that as a compliment! I mean, the characters are jerks sometimes but the actual writing of them is really good.
serbelino chapter 22 . 3/27/2013
I just love this story, it's so REAL. Thanks for sharing!
TigerBelle chapter 6 . 3/26/2013
Poor Edward!
TigerBelle chapter 5 . 3/25/2013
Aww Edward you are going around behind your wife's back. Shame on you. Makes me wonder if she isn't doing the same!
coldcalliope chapter 22 . 3/24/2013
These two are a mess but I live reading about their dysfunction. Can't wait for more!
Ophelia85 chapter 5 . 3/23/2013
Not really feeling this story...sorry.
Guest chapter 22 . 3/17/2013
3 volvi a leer toda la historia, me encanta esta Bella! ojala sean felices ycoman perdices con Edward...
pauleen chapter 22 . 3/17/2013
Blla does need to to talk to someone. Of feel her anxiety in her relationship and it did sound weird that The Cullens would consider going to Roses for Thanksgiving.
mimimgr chapter 22 . 3/14/2013
maybe her mom is right... talking to someone might help... she does seems quite stressed.
SLKerouac chapter 22 . 3/13/2013
Love this story. Please finish writing!
rubyblue9696 chapter 22 . 3/12/2013
...i LOVE this story...thank you for writing these two...and i swear to all higher powers that if they don't get their HEA i will cry, go into shock for like a week...and then eat a gallon of rocky love...

xxx jess
Lemon Charlotte chapter 21 . 3/11/2013
I really love this. I think I started the story just as you slowed down the writing. A long gap between postings/my reading of said posts has not dimmed my ardour.
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