Reviews for What You Want
UnbirthdayGirl chapter 1 . 11/2/2016
Adore it! Xx
BookwormishDragon chapter 1 . 8/2/2016
I really enjoyed how all the other scenes led up to that last one! I agree that having the last scene present tense feels right.
justthatweirdaussiegirl chapter 1 . 9/26/2015
Just wanted to say, really well written and was a good idea!
gabreader chapter 1 . 11/16/2014
Eeeehhhhh yessssss the adorable feeeels!
MomentoMori2 chapter 1 . 8/28/2014
It is so cute I can't stop this grin showing up on my face. I sit there and smile like a bloody idiot I am, because, really, that would never ever happen in reality (and I live with it perfectly, mind you, because otherwise it would have been too awkward and stupid) but this story is so funny I actually want it to be true. And i rarely want ANY fanfiction to come true, so you're an ultimate winner! :D Cheers :3
LunaNotLoony chapter 1 . 4/11/2014
LOved it! Very funny and a bit fluffy!
Anon chapter 1 . 1/18/2014
Great story!
thegirlwhoflies chapter 1 . 9/27/2013
Guest chapter 1 . 7/6/2013
So cute and funny. I especially like the last one. Lily aksing James out is my headcanon.
Scarlet Natalia chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
I liked what you did with the tenses, very clever! This was really sweet :)
Dandy352 chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
That really cute for a quick read! Thanks for writing. :D
papercranesandplanes chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
Ok, so this 5th scene was so sad... He was so nervous and his palms were sweating and he wiped them on his trousers, but she said no, without an explanation and he was just left there and decided to give up. Every time I read this, I find it sad... And,I just want to hug him and tell him it will all be all right in the end... Gah, these fics are ruining me!
Also, when he imitated her voice, lol that was funny. Love this story. :)
thewitchisdead chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
lovely story, always loving lily and james. They are perfect :)
BalloonsInTheSky chapter 1 . 6/14/2012
Hahaha... It's a great story. :)
GinnyEvans4 chapter 1 . 6/3/2012
Your writing makes me so happy! And im just gonna keep reviewing everyone, as annoying as that may be
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