Reviews for Ari's Revenge
Ladyaloysius chapter 10 . 5/25/2013
WhenI get my paws on a fic that's very good and complete I just dot stop until its done and then I review. If I misspell please excuse me. I'm typing with a stylus! Your story arc was very, very good! Just one thing tho', is your typing monkey related to Abby or has she (I think) found the fountain of Caf-Pow?
jal chapter 10 . 3/12/2012
nice one.
Ally Marie Ward chapter 10 . 12/31/2011
Hi Charlie:)
A-Aliehs chapter 10 . 8/12/2011
HEY GUYS! You did great. Psycho, your grammar and typing skills have gotten so much better! You don't need me to review anymore! :D. I loved it, great story!

By the way, typing monkey, if you can't tell who this is by me calling you PSYCHO... Well, then there's no hope for you :).
Wimpole Street chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
Pretty decent writing. Your grammar isn't all over the shop, like some fics based off tv shows, and the pacing is good. I'll be keeping my eye on this fic.

P.S. I noticed that you like Teen Titans fanfiction. Have you ever thought of writing your own Teen Titans story, perhaps centered around Robin (who you seem to like)? I started recently, and I don't regret it at all.
Esmerelda Diana Parker chapter 10 . 6/9/2011
*grins at the double Gibbs smack* LOVE IT!
louise1717 chapter 10 . 6/9/2011
yeah gibbss lives...what could be better

thanks again for tying to ehar shes writing more ncis fic...
louise1717 chapter 9 . 6/9/2011
all the typings worth it if gibbs lives...thankyou for your effort and thank your friend for her writing.

louise
louise1717 chapter 8 . 6/9/2011
but hows gibbs?
louise1717 chapter 7 . 6/9/2011
awesome but gibbs must live...
Liraeyn chapter 10 . 6/9/2011
Good story! Bye!
ladybugsmomma chapter 10 . 6/9/2011
I'm so glad they are all okay! Great story! Thank you for sharing!
CountessCora chapter 8 . 6/3/2011
This is so intriguing and I am excited to see more.
GetYourOwnGibbs chapter 8 . 6/3/2011
Thank you, Typing Monkey!

Cool story too.
ladybugsmomma chapter 8 . 6/3/2011
I can't wait to read more!
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