|Reviews for Sins, Love, and Misunderstandings|
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/30/2013
Its really a great story i really appreciate you writing this on your own if you didn't knew about the anime firstly i don't care a damn if its like the anime Yosuga no Sora but please will you write a story like this based on len and rin
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/19/2013
This is...like yosuga no sora?
| SOURPATCHKID03 chapter 2 . 4/16/2013
| SOURPATCHKID03 chapter 1 . 4/16/2013
Love the story;D
| Miki x Moon chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
Well. I have to say, the story captured my attention. Your writing is pretty good grammar-wise, and I needn't to pull my hair out.
Though what irritated me was the chapter's EXTREME similarity to Yosuga no Sora. Rin crashing into the bottles, Len kissing her, the ride to a new life, Rin with a bunny, lines similar - just maddening.
| P chapter 2 . 7/30/2012
don't feel bad :)
i really liked it .
| xThexFallenxAngelx chapter 1 . 1/18/2012
too lazy to log in O 3 O. THIS IS BASED ON SORA & HARU! Hehe. The bunny. The parents. Miku Nao. The kiss with the bottles. Hehe. My favourite anime EVER. 3.
| cheezersandcrackers chapter 1 . 8/6/2011
Anytime i read this i scroll down to the sex scene, and then scroll back up and read the whole thing again! (:
Anywho you did an awesome job! :D
| ayumi9696 chapter 2 . 8/1/2011
It was nice, pity it's a oneshot. I wanted to know about their 'other' family. Oh well...
| 1m4g1n3 dr4g0ns chapter 1 . 7/28/2011
im sorry but this makes no sense. okay. they kised when they were five... and they drink wine at fifteen. and whats the stupid party thing for, anyway?
| Pomporin300 chapter 1 . 7/27/2011
Hm, the start of this story when len and rin was still a kids,
is it from yosuga no sora?
| youkou-chan chapter 1 . 6/29/2011
I looove this story, but I gotta agree with azurex.
The only thing this story is lacking is...well maybe...Love?
I'm not quite sure of it myself, but it just seems like...empty （*・д・）; I felt as if Len would spout anything to get into a girl's pants. (such as when he kissed Miku and would call her later and stuff)
I kinda feel a bit...uneasy when I read it (｡д)
But still all those mean words pushed aside, this really is a wonderful story
Please write back soon!
| Shirai Phoenix chapter 1 . 6/29/2011
The beginning looks just like an episode of Yosuga No Sora, when Haru and Sora were playing hide-and-seek and Haru jumped from behind the curtain, scarying Sora. Then she bumps into shelves full of bottles and he saves her. They kiss and blah, blah, blah...
Maybe you know what I'm talking about?
Anyways, AWESOME STORY! Keep it up! Can't wait to read more stories from ya!
HaruxSora and RinxLen 4EVA!
| AnimexxGirlxx13 chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
This reminds me of Yosuga no Sora...and yeah, i know anyone that has read this has told you cuz i went to the next chapter before reviewing, but i just wanted to say that, so...nice chapter!
| Serena Scarlet chapter 1 . 6/27/2011
Yosuga no Sora and Vocaloids! Yays! Nice story, I enjoy your writing style!