|Reviews for An Unending Struggle|
| TorNathan chapter 18 . 3/7
Well, I didn't find anything here really interesting except for one thing:
Shin's power. I have a feeling Shinryu had a part to play there, but I could be wrong.
Also, the very last paragraph was the best paragraph in the chapter.
| Titano Man XIII chapter 1 . 3/6
This is a pretty good start in this story so far. I found Shin's interactions with the Gold Chocobo funny. I wonder how his first meeting with Terra shall go? It might help with KHA.
| TorNathan chapter 17 . 2/25
Anyway, your fight was okay enough. You write them long, but they're not done well. I do them well, but not long enough. Ugh, we continue to be two sides if the same coin, Herald.
| TorNathan chapter 16 . 2/25
There's nothing for me to really say.
Yay, Lunarians! Cool to see them so early. I fear that the race is about to die and the CPU will be taken.
Oh god, is Terra about to fight Lord Lezard Valeth? I hope I'm right in it being him; the sword kinda gave it away.
| TorNathan chapter 15 . 2/25
Okay. When it comes to the fight that is the namesake of the chapter, I found the dialogue between the two to be more moving than the action itself. 'Twas quite nice.
Aside from that, I like seeing the determination in the party. Not much else to say ab out the chapter except . . .
“Va-” . . . Lezard, perhaps? God-like complex. Glasses. Extreme power? Yeah, if I'm wrong then I allow you one time off your leash no matter what.
| TorNathan chapter 14 . 2/24
That was action, and it was done surprisingly well. I loved what you did with Edge and his "Mega-Flare-propelled-skewer-of-doom!"
Aside from the action, there wasn't much else. But that's okay.
The action was good.
| TorNathan chapter 13 . 2/19
Um . . . okay?
Did I also just get a description of a Heartless?
Kuja's sacrifice was noble and touching, just rushed.
Not much for me to say.
| Penguinlord352 chapter 73 . 2/7
I wish I could get away with swearing. Epic fight. Epic. Fight. Well done my friend, well done.
| Apprentice To Fantasy chapter 72 . 1/31
Welp, Shit just got real! Especially since Terra and her Esper are finally one. I guessing Feral Chaos is screwed at this point. Poor fellow. Merlina is still Merlina as usual! God it's been like, what, a few months or a year since I last reviewed? Sorry about that. Still trying to used to the ipad. That and Devil maker kept me busy. For some reason, I'm reminded of Persona 4 when I saw the Terra vs Esper battle. Anyways, I'm back and I'm gonna read the next chapter tonight. See ya!
| InhaledCorn chapter 73 . 1/30
Haha, finally read this after I've been meaning to for the longest time. And, welp, this chapter... gods damn! Enjoyed the read.
| TorNathan chapter 12 . 1/29
Yo Kain, I heard you were a badass that could TEAR RIFTS IN WORLDS! Fun chapter and it really helps a lot on this confused mind. Onto the next!
| TorNathan chapter 11 . 1/29
Well, there was some surprising plot advancement. I actually liked all the different scenarios going on in rapid succession, even if it was rushed. Especially that Shadow scene . . . grrr. I shall continue.
| FoolsSin chapter 73 . 1/27
Finally! It's about time...
that being said, that definitely was an awesome chapter. although Shin and Terra working in perfect sync is a bit peculiar... hmmmm...
anyways, Chaos has been taken down, and it's on to chasing Xehanort (whom is one of my fav villains of all time.) and the rest of his goons... although I'm half expecting Maduin to put Shin in a full body cast if he says something stupid. anyways, it's a great chapter and the next one hopefully will have the same level of humor as michael mario's fic...
| Lucenthia chapter 73 . 1/27
Holy fricking crap, that was an amazing fight scene. I normally don't pay that much attention to them, but goddamn, that was awesome.
First of all, it was of epic proportions, but it was still GOOD! I liked how the whole fight went in progressions. The little bit where Terra and Chaos are in Chaos' own universe was cool. I loved how all the warriors contributed, it wasn't just Terra and Shin fighting, and the way they could all block Chaos' sword was classic in a good way.
I was amazed that Tidus of all people saved Terra. That's almost like having Lightning do it. And Tidus got a lot of spotlight too. The little Blitzball fun with Jecht was cool.
Garland's dying moment was great. Better than anything the game could've done. His sentiments, the way he stayed true to himself, it was blissful. I didn't like it as much as the fight, which is saying A LOT, but it was almost masterful.
This was the best chapter you've ever written.
| The Dark Dragon Emperor chapter 73 . 1/26
I WAS RIGHT! THERE WAS A BLOODBATH!
Quick, get the medics, Shin's going to need them once Maudin and Madaline are through with him.