Reviews for Accused
Maunzeli chapter 20 . 4/21/2013
Really liked the story except for the ending. Can't have NCIS without Tim...
lightinshadow chapter 1 . 4/7/2012
hi that story was super amazing

plz what story among urs is the sequel?
special agent Ali chapter 20 . 3/3/2012
okay you made me cry your too evil but was a very good story and as u know am reading sequel i just hope u bring Tim back.

But I did love last 2 chaps of this the most. Tim's celebration hugs with the team was so sweet ev1 really is a family to him awww
special agent Ali chapter 14 . 3/3/2012
aw okay so reading backstory now and aw finally reviewing cuz it was a sweet McAbby moment
Ensign Cole chapter 20 . 2/19/2012

was awesome! such a sad ending though :(
SkarletMetal chapter 6 . 11/17/2011
Oh, no...

Shit just had to hit the fan. Someone *really* doesn't like McGee.
SkarletMetal chapter 5 . 11/17/2011
It really speaks to McGee's character that his number-one priority would be finding the real perpetrator, even though he's also worried about his situation going public. He's sometimes seen as the weak link in the NCIS team, but he's got such a good heart.

The part where Abby lashes out at Greg gave me a good laugh. I respect a dramatic story that can maintain humor. So few stories are able to do that, but yours is a pleasant exception.

And in response to your A/N, this wasn't rushed at all - or too slow. The pacing this far has been perfect.
SkarletMetal chapter 4 . 11/17/2011
Grrr, I just realized I made a grammatical mistake in my last review - God, I hate when I do that! "Why whom?" is supposed to be "by whom?" I'm sure you could've figured that out for yourself, but I still wanted to mention it because...well, that's the way I roll. :P

Anyway, excellent chapter you have here. I was just waiting for either DiNozzo or McGee to be head-slapped by Gibbs, and I got two for the price of one! Eeee!

I'm glad Gibbs is bringing in more people to investigate. Obviously NCIS isn't exactly qualified to investigate because they're biased towards the suspect. I hope Fornell and Greg can sort everything out, though, judging by the length of your story, I imagine it's going to take a lot of hard work and digging.

Poor, poor McGee. He did have a good point when he said no one would care about his innocence once the media got involved. That's so true! As soon as someone's charged with a crime, everyone automatically assumes they're guilty. The repulsion they feel over the crime itself clouds their judgment and all they're concerned about is that someone is made to pay.
SkarletMetal chapter 3 . 11/17/2011
So Tim is definitely being framed. But why? And why whom? Oooh, the mystery.

I can't tell you how much I love the way you propel your story. I really can't. You wouldn't believe the number of stories I've seen where literally nothing happens until about halfway through, or later. This right here is a breathe of fresh air! I'm only three chapters in and already I feel as if *so* much has gone down. Mad props to you!

A pretty consistent error I spot, though, is that you sometimes use a comma when you should use a period. An example of this is: "The walk to the car was silent, Tim just wanted to get to his apartment as soon as possible." A period should follow "silent" because both "The walk to the car was silent" and "Tim just wanted to get to his apartment as soon as possible" are complete thoughts. Again, a minor thing. I just wanted to bring it to your attention. ;)
SkarletMetal chapter 2 . 11/17/2011
Aww, poor McGee. I wonder, did someone set him up? Sure seems like it. A rare button with DNA on it is pretty substantial evidence. And of course it doesn't help matters that the victim, Alli, was raped by a guy who was wearing a condom. That, in and of itself, strikes me as particularly odd. Intelligent on the culprit's part, but fishy.

Just to point something out to you, for future reference, whenever you mention the title of a movie you should italicize it, because it's considered a professional piece of art. It's not a big deal, and definitely does not detract from your story, but I thought I should let you know nonetheless.

Another great chapter. Looking forward to reading the next!
SkarletMetal chapter 1 . 11/17/2011
Oh my gosh, oh my gosh, oh my're a fan of NCIS! I knew you wrote Suite Life fanfiction, but I didn't know you wrote NCIS fanfiction too. And really good fanfiction, I might add. It's been a while since I've seen this kind of quality. The characterization was spot on (dialogue was superb) and I love how you dive right into the meat and potatoes of your story, rather than saturating it with unnecessary details about the show's backstory - something many other writers tend to do, even though it's already understood by their readers. I can't wait to see how this plays out. You have got me hooked.
inspirationimagination chapter 20 . 10/26/2011
OMG amazing twist at the end! Love how he takes bert, kind of like he's taking a piece of Abby with him, Loved this, can't wait for a sequal xXx
inspirationimagination chapter 17 . 10/26/2011
Hi, me again lol. I know this is looonnnggg overdue but just so you know, you shouldn't take what reviewers say to hear (at least not the bad ones), I think it's just rude and spineless of that eprson to not respect your choices for your story lol I happen to love this story and can't believe I didn't read it sooner, you're amazing *high five*
inspirationimagination chapter 12 . 10/26/2011
I only just found your story but I'm absolutely loving it, I like how you've altered McGee, a side I'd never thought I'd see of him, but it's awesome. Gonna continue reading, I'm sure it'll be consistently good x
togetherweloki'd chapter 9 . 8/21/2011
I cried at this chapter.I'm now trying to hide it from my grandfather who is sitting like 10 feet from me right now.I feel sorry for a very great chapter...though.
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