Reviews for A Change of Instinct
CarmelMoon chapter 14 . 5/9/2014
Mick, Mick you are such a prick! To do such a dick move to Mara you are surely losing your groove. I hope you are happy because now my poem is all sappy, so now I hope you end up in a com(a)! Give me a J-J, give me a A-A, give me a R-R, give me a A-A, what does that spell?JARA! I love Jara so dang much, so thank you for writing this fanfiction! And sorry if my poem is kinda crappy.
TooBusyBeingAnAwkoTaco chapter 17 . 4/9/2014
Yay, I totally loved this story, start to finish! Great job! :)
LucianDaughterofHades chapter 10 . 7/19/2013
Omg I'm reading this for the second time, sorry for not reviewing the first time, and the first half of this chapter I read while listening to Last Kiss by Taylor Swift and ITS SO SAD! So well written btw :)
RandomGirl888 chapter 17 . 3/12/2013
I know I read it way after it was published but I ABSOLUTELY LOVED YOUR STORY! IT WAS PERFECT IN EVERY WAY! IT INCLUDED JUST THE RIGHT LEVEL OF ROMANCE AT THE SAME TIME AS KEEPING THE READER INTERESTED AND WAS WRITTED EXTREMELY CLEARLY AND WELL SO IT WAS EASY TO UNDERSTAND. PERFECT PERFECT PERFECT! :D
angelz123 chapter 17 . 12/7/2012
amazing storyteller :D
RetroNick chapter 8 . 10/7/2012
Before even jara I hate mick
LuvFiction Xxxx chapter 17 . 7/24/2012
I loved your story I would have reviewed every chapter to tell u how much I loved it but when I finished a chapter I had to kept reading to the end it was that good. :)
XxMuffinSlayerxX chapter 14 . 7/19/2012
*sighs in relief* all better ) you made it better. And for that, I thank you. Haha great chapter. Alfie go blow up some aliens and stop delaying the fricking Jara!
XxMuffinSlayerxX chapter 9 . 7/19/2012
Oh crap nuggets! This is all a bad dream... She just CAN'T be picking Mick, that meathead, over Jerome! Make it stop, make it stop! T_T poor Jerome! He'll be crushed! Mara is my favorite character, but she is making the wrong choice. Patricia is right, dump Mick's sorry behind! Anyways… good chapter. But I keep faith in the Jara!
RetroNick chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
Finished reading one year on am 2 tired now 18 minutes past 2 will read this later Thankz 4 jara work
TodayTomorrowYesterday chapter 17 . 1/18/2012
that's so adorable!

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Guest chapter 17 . 1/3/2012
LOVE this story. Amazing idea! It's amazing how you capture the characters so well- I can imagine them all acting exactly as they did here! I used to think that you made Mick too violent, but then I saw what Dutch Mick did when he found out that Jerome and Mara kissed. Psychopath.

Jara 4evaaaaaaaaaa
remix-says-bonjour chapter 8 . 10/31/2011
i hate mick team jara all the way lol
MandooH chapter 17 . 8/8/2011
Okay, so I really, really loved this story! It was just brilliant! I guess I should give some constructive critics, but I just can't come to think about anything else to say than: Amazing work!

I even had to link it at my blog
FlufferDoodlez chapter 17 . 7/6/2011
I LOVED your story so much. You are definately a talented writer.
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