|Reviews for The Pride of Sunnydale|
| Guest chapter 11 . 3/4
very good, loved
| bigfan22 chapter 11 . 2/16
I have to say this was the BEST Xander centric story I have read on this site or any other other. I would also consider this one of the best Buffy fics I've ever read. The twist with the lion's spirit was a great twist to the cannon story. Since Xander is one of my favorite characters, and it bugs me how much the show denigrated him, I love this story for what it turned him into.
Being the alpha of his pride, I'm surprised more women aren't banging down the door to be with Xand man, but other than that I love how you've written this character.
The last update date shows it's been a really long time since a new chapter has been posted for this story, and I really hope you haven't abandoned it. I can't wait to see how everything else plays out...Kendra, Faith, Mayor, Initiative, ADAM, Glory. Thanks for writing this KICK-ASS story, and I really hope you have some time to get back to it! Great job!
| Dracco chapter 11 . 2/11
Anymore, or is this dead?
| lucas.mikkelsen.1 chapter 11 . 1/15
| agnar chapter 6 . 1/11
Yeah, I'm going to stop reading here. It's too bad, I really like Xanders power up, and the changes in his home life, more training, help, advice, job, etc. via Giles.
But this chapter, and peeking at reviews for the rest show me you're going to stick to the utter shit that is angel/buffy. Ignoring all the VAST changes in buffy/xander interactions, ignoring that xanders instincts are/would be screaming for him to be with multiple ladies so it wouldn't be hurting willow but they all just go through the teen angst bullshit of canon.
Boring, and annoying. I really dislike angel, he's a fucking sicko, he's an ancient corpse putting moves on a 15/16 year old for fucks sake! Sorry but you lost me by handing us too much canon shit despite doing excellent work on changing Xanders circumstances. You treat it like Xander is changing in a vacuum though, like his changes aren't effecting ANYONE else.
| kffs chapter 11 . 1/8
Super fun and interesting.
Thanks for writing!
| SomeGuy chapter 11 . 1/7
Hey i don't even know if you're ever going to continue this story but if you do PLEASE don't abandon the idea of a harem/threeway relationship with Xander, Buffy and Willow. I'll say what plenty of others have said: it does not have to match the show perfectly. you can kill off different characters at different times and leave out other characters all together (Oz). So PLEASE don't shoe horn those characters in their or abandon the threeway idea
| vampireharry the 2 chapter 11 . 1/6
This is amazing! I hope for more!
| MS60Cutter chapter 11 . 12/14/2013
I only found this recently (yesterday 12/13/2013) and I can only hope it's still active. I hate finding something that I really enjoy and then having it deadend. And I found myself really enjoying this. On the other hand since these stories are being written for a completely different reason than most fiction I guess I have to understand. But that's understand, not empathize. I want MORE! To paraphrase - give me something to sing about.
| Preier chapter 11 . 12/13/2013
I was a bit hesitant to start reading this story (read too many bad harem stories not to be a bit wary) but i was very pleasantly surprised. good job with the instincts vs human mind.
xander is a bit powerfull and the fast healing grants him leave to take a bit too much wounds with no long term impact. still a very good and enjoyable story
thank you for sharing your tales
| Twylyte chapter 11 . 10/17/2013
This is absolutely brilliant. I mean that, it really is an incredible story. I sincerely hope you continue writing this wonderful piece of writing.
| Hercule8 chapter 11 . 10/13/2013
Liking the story. Please Update!
| Hercules8 chapter 1 . 10/12/2013
An interesting idea, giving Xander the spirit of a lion and giving him the willpower to resist it. Please continue this story.
| lok chapter 11 . 10/8/2013
ive just reread your stories for the third time, I wanted to just say that it was amazing. You are a skilled author and one of my favorites, their are many stories on this site but few are up to the same standard of quality as yours, especially this one. I do hope you continue the pride of Sunnydale at least through the ascension ark if not the whole series. Hope things are well wherever you are. and Thank you for this story.
| tarrangar chapter 11 . 8/23/2013
good story hope its not dropped