Reviews for Mouth to Mouth |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I just couldn't stop smiling while reading this story. Love it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() AWWWWW! Great story, and wonderful ending ;) |
![]() ![]() Zomg this was too cute! So. Much. FLUFF! I love it! |
![]() ![]() Wow. this is perfection. I will have you know that I looooove this show and helgaxarnold is my otp! Sooo sweet and adorable. I want this to be canon! #fangirlingsohard |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH MY GOSH! THAT WAS TOTALLY AWESOME! I LOVED LOVED LOVED IT! (: (: (: (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my frigging god! I absolutely loved this little story here! It made me feel like I was blushing too, just like Arnold as Helga was producing her escape route from revealing her secret :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww. This... was just so cute! And I especially liked the characterization of both Arnold AND Helga. You nailed them! So many times during the mind rants I thought 'this is brilliant', very Helga-like logic, and very so Arnold-like flow of events, so cannon, such a lovely change from the many fanfics out there that just don't get it right... Though it was a bit too naive for Arnold right at the end, you could have probably left it with some untold thoughts, like he wasn't sure he actually believed her but couldn't think of another explanation why it couldn't be like that. It would make that dream scene even funnier. Oh you could probably do without some of the text, avoid repeating ideas, shortening things when possible, specially towards the end, but overall, soooo pretty. Final thought: Love. Seriously, good job :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Adorable :) |
![]() ![]() Aww... do I have to say this? I LOVE IT! |
![]() ![]() Aaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwww ssssooooo cccuuuuttteeeee! Brings out my girly side |
![]() ![]() HA! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brava! Brava! Bravissima! I loved it utterly and completely! You're an excellent writer! |
![]() ![]() ![]() *Jaw drops to the floor* Write a book and get it published. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was a very good one-shot, u should do an epilogue, like without bein the 8years. Just sayin seddieluv4ever |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good one-shot. It would've been interesting to see Arnold make a move or figure out Helga's feelings after the first part of this one-shot, rather than after TJM, but then I suppose this wouldn't be so much an epilogue as a regular story... Either way, I did like this. Good writing. |